Spiked (by Ludub) - comments

[pembie]

13 minutes ago, Ludub said:

Is that a euphemism?!!!! Hahaha! 

Well what else is there to do on a lazy Sunday?

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Justin trying to convince Brody vampires don't exist.

Brody drinking Hannah's blood

Morten appearing at the end of this chapter.

Update again soon

[Red Ranger 1]

Justin ironically in denial about what's happened to Brody... Brody seems to have found a solution to his condition but Morten isn't happy about it. Looking forward to more!

[pembie]

Is Justin mad? what a wild story to come up with for being raped even if its done some serious damage to you, oh I'm a vampire. And I thought people told me crazy stuff but if anyone told me they might be a vampire I think I might draw the line at that and run away screaming

Funny fact Not that I'm that fussed about Brody at all but doesn't he have blue eyes?

As soon as Justin said group counselling I thought tasty treats to be had there so maybe I am a vampire too?

Oh and you be happy to here I have enjoyed shapening my blunt rusty spike all day its brought me great joy...............Oh sorry I thought I was part of a group counselling sessoion then talk about over sharing but hey ho I got my pun in Bet you have missed those

Edited August 6, 2017 by pembie

[Ludub]

58 minutes ago, pembie said:

Funny fact Not that I'm that fussed about Brody at all but doesn't he have blue eyes?

Yes, maybe the wording of that was a little off. The brown eyes are Justin's, Brody is doing the looking, haha! 

[bijou]

Great update you've really wrote Justin realistically 

Brody not wanting to kill his victims unfortunately for him thats inevitable 

Edited August 7, 2017 by bijou

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Whoa at Brody drinking Hannah's blood

Loved how Justin tried to explain to Brody that vampires doesn't exist 

Update soon please xx

[Ludub]

On 06/08/2017 at 11:41 PM, Kristen said:

Justin trying to convince Brody vampires don't exist.

On 06/08/2017 at 11:46 PM, Red Ranger 1 said:

Justin ironically in denial about what's happened to Brody.

On 07/08/2017 at 0:23 AM, pembie said:

Is Justin mad? what a wild story to come up with for being raped even if its done some serious damage to you, oh I'm a vampire. And I thought people told me crazy stuff but if anyone told me they might be a vampire I think I might draw the line at that and run away screaming

On 09/08/2017 at 11:51 PM, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Loved how Justin tried to explain to Brody that vampires doesn't exist 

Haha! Well, what would you say to your brother if he told you he was a vampire?  Especially if the hospital had a very different take on what happened to him? 

On 07/08/2017 at 9:04 AM, bijou said:

you've really wrote Justin realistically 

Thank you! I love Justin, and his relationship with his family, so I'm trying very hard to get his tone right.

On 07/08/2017 at 0:23 AM, pembie said:

As soon as Justin said group counselling I thought tasty treats to be had there so maybe I am a vampire too?

Haha! Maybe so? You aren't looking at your brother thinking 'hmm, he looks tasty'? 

Thanks for the kind comment s everyone, and apologies for the big delay in updating. Got a bit distracted with my other story. I'll try to get the new chapter up tonight or tomorrow x

[pembie]

Yes come on release the new chapter already before my my sharpen spike loses its sparkle

[Ludub]

1 minute ago, pembie said:

Yes come on release the new chapter already before my my sharpen spike loses its sparkle

Groan  Will you ever get tired of these puns?