Guest Posted July 6, 2016 Report Posted July 6, 2016 Great start. Liked the dream. I felt for Heath after he woke up from the dream. Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted July 6, 2016 Report Posted July 6, 2016 Really great start! That would be horrible for Heath! Thinking for a few fleeting moments that Kyle wasn't really dead, only to wake up and find that the nightmare of his death was really true. Poor Heath. Looking forward to seeing where you take this Quote
Inactive User Posted July 6, 2016 Report Posted July 6, 2016 Great start, Suzza101 Really felt sorry for Heath when he realised it was a dream about Kyle beginning alive Looking forwards to the next chapter Quote
KyB Posted July 7, 2016 Report Posted July 7, 2016 Haven't read the first story but omg this is so good. Quote
Ludub Posted July 9, 2016 Report Posted July 9, 2016 I really liked this chapter. I really feel for Heath and can completely understand why he doesn't want to go to the grave. It's all still too raw for him. Celebrating Kyle's birthday, now that he's dead, when they didn't celebrate before, is like rubbing salt in the wound. Poor Heath. I would go with option 2. I like that one the most but they're all good Quote
Inactive User Posted July 10, 2016 Report Posted July 10, 2016 Great chapter Poor Heath Can't blame him when he said he doesn't want to go and visit Kyle's grave I agree with Ludub's comment about going for option 2 Update soon please Xxx Quote
Guest Posted July 10, 2016 Report Posted July 10, 2016 Great chapter poor Heath it's sad he doesn't want to go visit Kyle's grave it must be so hard for him. I agree with Sarah and Lubub's comment above. Update again soon Quote
Guest Posted July 18, 2016 Report Posted July 18, 2016 Great chapter very emotional. my favourite nickname was KyKy and the favourite gift was the toy guitar because in Kyle's Past it was his life. Update again soon Suzza Quote
Ludub Posted July 18, 2016 Report Posted July 18, 2016 Aww, very emotional chapter. I really liked 'Kyky' as a nickname too, very cute. Interested to see where you take this. Quote
Inactive User Posted July 19, 2016 Report Posted July 19, 2016 Such a touching and beautiful, emoticonal chapter! I love the nickname KyKy Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Quote
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