Ludub Posted July 21, 2016 Report Posted July 21, 2016 Wow, great chapter! Heath must be very worried about himself to go to Nate like that. You write Heath really well. I liked the "Oi doc, I need a word" line and Nate's reaction, lol! Looking forward to the next update x Quote
Guest Posted July 21, 2016 Report Posted July 21, 2016 (edited) Great chapter poor Heath can't believe Duncan called the Braxton's loved Heath saying Oi Doc I need a a word. Update again soon Edited July 21, 2016 by Kristen Quote
Inactive User Posted July 21, 2016 Report Posted July 21, 2016 Great chapter Can't believe Duncan had the cheek to call the Braxtons Loved Heath's line 'Oi Doc, I need a word.' to Nate Update soon please xx Quote
Guest Posted August 5, 2016 Report Posted August 5, 2016 (edited) Great chapter liked Nate trying to help Heath. I felt for Heath when he had the flashback of Kyle. Update again soon Suzza Edited August 5, 2016 by Kristen Quote
Ludub Posted August 5, 2016 Report Posted August 5, 2016 Poor Heath! It must be so awful to know that you treated someone so badly and never be able to apologise! No wonder he's falling to pieces. Kyle never fought back because being treated badly was all he'd ever known. He just expected it. Heath didn't know the damage he was doing! Liked Nate trying to help him though and I was a bit surprised at how honest Heath was with him. He must be very worried about himself! Really looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
Inactive User Posted August 6, 2016 Report Posted August 6, 2016 Great chapter Liked how Nate tried to help Heath Felt sorry for Heath when he has a flashback of Kyle Update soon please xx Quote
Ludub Posted August 10, 2016 Report Posted August 10, 2016 Oh my god, I loved this chapter. How beautiful! I'd love to think that Kyle got to be happy in the afterlife and that he's not angry with Heath. Just a pity that he can't let Heath know that. Really looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
Guest Posted August 10, 2016 Report Posted August 10, 2016 (edited) Great chapter I agree with Lubud's comment. Im glad Kyle is happy in his after life. Update again soon Edited August 10, 2016 by Kristen Quote
Inactive User Posted August 10, 2016 Report Posted August 10, 2016 Great chapter Liked Kyle beginning happy in the afterlife Update soon please xx Quote
Ludub Posted August 19, 2016 Report Posted August 19, 2016 Aww, this is such a lovely chapter! Really enjoyed the conversation between Kyle and his mum (especially the mention of Danny - he did just use and abuse him really). Love her calling him a 'prince'. The whole thing is very touching Poor Heath continuing to beat himself up about the way that he treated Kyle! He can't go back and change things so he'll always have questions about the things that he did, and the way that he treated Kyle, but no way to get the answers that he needs. Everyone else is right though.He shouldn't be blaming himself like that.Poor guy. Really looking forward to the next chapter! x Quote
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