Guest Posted September 7, 2016 Report Posted September 7, 2016 Great chapter seems like Bianca saw the ghost too. Loved the bonding between Nephew and Uncle Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted September 7, 2016 Report Posted September 7, 2016 Oh I loved this chapter so much! It's interesting. The story is called 'Heath's Torture' but Kyle's death has had a huge impact on everyone that loved him, not just Heath. Very true for any family that has lost someone through violence. The thought of what Kyle suffered for all those years is clearly torturing Casey too and I can understand why he wants to know what happened. Everyone has different ways of dealing with things. I feel very sad for all of them. Glad that Heath is so excited about the baby though and the scene with Rocco was very touching. What did Bianca see?! Quote
Inactive User Posted September 7, 2016 Report Posted September 7, 2016 Great chapter Loved the uncle-nephew scenes between Kyle and Rocco Wondering if Bianca has seen Kyle's ghost...? Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Quote
Guest Posted September 12, 2016 Report Posted September 12, 2016 (edited) Great chapter poor Heath seeing Kyle's ghost still. I really thought Bianca saw the ghost too. Loved the flashback. Loved the Rocco/Kyle/Lisa moments up in heaven. Update again soon Edited September 12, 2016 by Kristen Quote
Ludub Posted September 12, 2016 Report Posted September 12, 2016 Oh, such a lovely chapter. Nice little twist that Bianca didn't see Kyle after all. Poor Heath though. Loved the flashback of Kyle's brotherly chat with Casey. I really liked the way he teased him but it was clear that he was only looking out for him. Also the little hint of Kyle's past abuse when he was too scared to stand up against the crazy girl's brother (a hint that Casey missed at the time). The scene with Kyle and Rocco was lovely again, love those two together! Looking forward to the next update x Quote
Inactive User Posted September 13, 2016 Report Posted September 13, 2016 Great chapter, Suzza101 Such a bummer that Bianca didn't see Kyle. Liked the flashback of Kyle and Casey's brotherly chat Loved the scene between Kyle and Rocco Update soon please xx Quote
Guest Posted September 15, 2016 Report Posted September 15, 2016 Great chapter Loved the flashback Bianca had of Kyle. I hope Sasha texts Casey back Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted September 15, 2016 Report Posted September 15, 2016 Oh such a nice chapter. Really enjoying this story. It's such a pity that Kyle didn't get to tell Heath that he loved him and they never got to have a heart to heart. Also a pity that Heath picked on him as much as he did. Of course, he couldn't have known what Kyle had been through at that stage. He wouldn't have behaved that way if he had. Looking forward to the next chapter. Have a good time while you're away! x Quote
Inactive User Posted September 15, 2016 Report Posted September 15, 2016 Great chapter Liked the flashback Bianca has of Kyle Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Quote
Guest Posted September 27, 2016 Report Posted September 27, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Poor Heath still blaming himself for Kyle's death Liked that you added Charlie into this and liked the chat between Kyle and Charlie. Update again soon Edited September 27, 2016 by Kristen Quote
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