Red Ranger 1 Posted October 23, 2016 Report Posted October 23, 2016 Kyle nearly giving the gang too much information was funny. It seems they're starting to get freaked out but a lot of the group still won't believe something's going on... Quote
Guest Posted October 24, 2016 Report Posted October 24, 2016 Great chapter So everyone's heard Ray it seems like. Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted October 24, 2016 Author Report Posted October 24, 2016 Great chapter I laughed when Kyle nearly gave the gang too much information! Update soon please xx Quote
Ludub Posted October 24, 2016 Report Posted October 24, 2016 Everyone's getting a bit jumpy now, aren't they? Pity no one's really taking Casey seriously. I wonder what'll happen when the boss gets there Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
Guest Posted October 31, 2016 Report Posted October 31, 2016 Great two chapters I hope Tamara will be found. Wonder what Ray will do to Kyle. Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted October 31, 2016 Report Posted October 31, 2016 Oh no! Poor Kyle! I wonder if Ray is going to strike now?! Enjoyed Ray's amusement at watching the teens argue. Definitely more interesting than going to back to his tent on his own. And... Casey kind of proved Tamara's point in this argument really Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 31, 2016 Report Posted October 31, 2016 Casey didn't take Tamara's suggestion too well and now Kyle's in danger... Quote
Ludub Posted November 1, 2016 Report Posted November 1, 2016 Great chapter! Loved Kyle and Tamara's heart to heart. He is a very good friend. I'm not sure Casey would be that happy with Kyle's advice to his girlfriend, but he just told it like it is. Sometimes people need to break up for a while, and sometimes they need to break up altogether... Interesting that Kyle chose to open up to her and not to Phoebe. Wonder what he's going to tell her. Really looking forward to the next chapter x 1 Quote
AtlantaG1912 Posted November 1, 2016 Report Posted November 1, 2016 1 minute ago, Ludub said: Great chapter! Loved Kyle and Tamara's heart to heart. He is a very good friend. I'm not sure Casey would be that happy with Kyle's advice to his girlfriend, but he just told it like it is. Sometimes people need to break up for a while, and sometimes they need to break up altogether... Interesting that Kyle chose to open up to her and not to Phoebe. Wonder what he's going to tell her. Really looking forward to the next chapter x thank you for continuing to read my fanfic and I'm happy you are still enjoying it. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted November 1, 2016 Author Report Posted November 1, 2016 Great chapters Hoping Tamara better be found Wondering what Ray is going to do to Kyle... Loved Ray's amusement when he watched the teens arguing, lol. Glad Kyle found Tamara and liked how he is beginning a friend to her Update soon please xx Quote
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