Ludub Posted November 4, 2016 Report Posted November 4, 2016 Ray cracks me up He really shouldn't be doing this job at all, should he?! Poor guy! Also, his boss really doesn't seem to be taking this thing too seriously or to be in any hurry to get there at all. Really looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
AtlantaG1912 Posted November 4, 2016 Report Posted November 4, 2016 1 hour ago, Ludub said: Ray cracks me up He really shouldn't be doing this job at all, should he?! Poor guy! Also, his boss really doesn't seem to be taking this thing too seriously or to be in any hurry to get there at all. Really looking forward to the next chapter x he cracks me up as well and I'm the one writing it lol. the boss in my mind is taking it seriously he's just someone who i feel likes to have everything in place before he starts another part of his plan. and thank you for keeping with this fanfic and I'm happy you are enjoying it. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted November 4, 2016 Author Report Posted November 4, 2016 Great chapter I agree with Ludub's comment And Ray does crack me up too, lol. Looking forwards to the next chapter xx Quote
Guest Posted November 4, 2016 Report Posted November 4, 2016 Great chapter I agree with Lubud's comment as well. Ray is hilarious Update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 4, 2016 Report Posted November 4, 2016 Hmm, Ray seems to be starting to sympathise with Kyle... 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted November 4, 2016 Report Posted November 4, 2016 I love this chapter oh no looks like trouble is oniony quick I just hope Kyle doesn't get hurt but it seems that Ray is starting to feel sorry for him please update soon 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 8, 2016 Report Posted December 8, 2016 Hmm, wonder which of the sides will claim victory on that one...Looking forward to more! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted December 9, 2016 Report Posted December 9, 2016 I liked Xavier's idea! Pretending that the prank didn't work is absolutely the best pay back! lol! Looking forward to the next chapter x 1 Quote
Guest Posted December 9, 2016 Report Posted December 9, 2016 Great chapter Loved Xavier's and the boys idea to pretend the prank didn't work update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted December 9, 2016 Author Report Posted December 9, 2016 Great chapter Liked the idea that the boys had by pretending that the prank didn't work Update soon please Xxx 1 Quote
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