Ludub Posted February 7, 2017 Report Posted February 7, 2017 It sounds like they're having a good evening! I can understand Kyle being nervous about Truth or Dare. I hope they don't put him on the spot and upset him (even if they don't mean to). Really liked Belle teasing Aden about his teddy bears (kind of wish that was true! haha!) 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted February 7, 2017 Author Report Posted February 7, 2017 Great two chapters Liked the chat between Aden and Kyle. And loved how Kyle told Aden about his mum. So sad about what Kyle had gone through when he was little. Loved the teens playing Twisters Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Ludub Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 Oooh! Nice twist! Uncle Derek, eh?! Love it! Ray and Derek continue to be quite funny. Love their interaction. Glad Ray tried to stick up for Kyle but it looks like Derek might not be that easy to persuade! Wonder if Kyle knows about his inheritance (that I guess is being held in trust?) I suspect not. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted February 12, 2017 Author Report Posted February 12, 2017 Great chapter Whoa Derek is Kyle's uncle-interesting twist! Liked how Ray tried to stick up for Kyle Update soon please Xxx 1 Quote
AtlantaG1912 Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 1 hour ago, Ludub said: Oooh! Nice twist! Uncle Derek, eh?! Love it! Ray and Derek continue to be quite funny. Love their interaction. Glad Ray tried to stick up for Kyle but it looks like Derek might not be that easy to persuade! Wonder if Kyle knows about his inheritance (that I guess is being held in trust?) I suspect not. 3 minutes ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Great chapter Whoa Derek is Kyle's uncle-interesting twist! Liked how Ray tried to stick up for Kyle Update soon please Xxx thanks for continuing to read the camping trip and i'm glad you liked the twist as the original idea for derek was that he was an old boyfriend who knew about the money but i felt like Derek would be better off as kyle's uncle as it was a bigger twist than an old boyfriend. So happy it has paid off. I will update at some point this week so keep a look out for the next chapter. xx 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 Ooh! So we finally know who Derek is. Liked his reaction to the rather large teen camping party... 2 Quote
Guest Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 Great chapter Liked the twist that Derek is Kyle's uncle. Update again soon Quote
Guest Posted February 19, 2017 Report Posted February 19, 2017 Great chapter Glad the game was fun Josh running around naked and getting in trouble by the police Oh no Kyle and his friend Jake got high as teenagers. Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted February 19, 2017 Report Posted February 19, 2017 Glad Kyle managed the game okay and everyone had fun. I can't quite imagine Josh running down the street naked, lol! Poor Kyle, getting tricked into doing drugs. That would have been quite scary. Looking forward to the next chapter x 1 Quote
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