Guest Posted February 19, 2017 Report Posted February 19, 2017 Great chapter Ray really doesn't want to help Derek. I hope he does warn the teenagers. Update again soon P.S you're probably about to or are writing the next chapter now Quote
AtlantaG1912 Posted February 19, 2017 Report Posted February 19, 2017 On 19/02/2017 at 12:14, Kristen said: Great chapter Ray really doesn't want to help Derek. I hope he does warn the teenagers. Update again soon P.S you're probably about to or are writing the next chapter now Expand yeah how did you guess haven't posted much this week or the week before that so wanted to post a couple today. Quote
Ludub Posted February 19, 2017 Report Posted February 19, 2017 (edited) Yay for Ray! Glad he's trying to help Kyle! Pretty brave considering the threats that Derek has made against Ray's family. Just hope the teens believe him. Quite a sweet little scene between Josh and Kyle too. Edited February 19, 2017 by Ludub 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 19, 2017 Report Posted February 19, 2017 Nice trio of chapters, Kyle seems to be getting on okay with his friends and looks like Ray could be on the home team after all... 1 Quote
AtlantaG1912 Posted February 19, 2017 Report Posted February 19, 2017 On 19/02/2017 at 16:57, Red Ranger 1 said: Nice trio of chapters, Kyle seems to be getting on okay with his friends and looks like Ray could be on the home team after all... Expand thanks for the lovely comment and continuing to read my fanfiction 1 Quote
Guest Posted February 19, 2017 Report Posted February 19, 2017 Great chapter Liked Kyle agreeing to teach Josh to play guitar and Josh agreeing to help Kyle with a computer game. Wonder who that guy was I'm guessing it's Ray glad he told the teenagers Kyle is in danger. Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted February 19, 2017 Author Report Posted February 19, 2017 Great chapters Loved the teenagers having fun playng the game Aw poor Kyle getting tricked into doing drugs Oh dear! Looks like Ray doesn't want to help Derek I bet it is Ray at the end of the chapter. I wonder how the teenagers will react? Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 24, 2017 Report Posted February 24, 2017 Ooh! So seems like Kyle knows about Derek. He seems to have made the right call trusting Ray. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted February 24, 2017 Report Posted February 24, 2017 Ooh interesting! So Kyle does know who his uncle Derek is and what he did I'm so glad that Ray decided to do the right thing and warn them. Just hope it doesn't go badly for him as a result. Looking forward to the next chapter x 1 Quote
Guest Posted February 24, 2017 Report Posted February 24, 2017 Great chapters So Kyle knows about Derek. I hope Derek doesn't catch up to Kyle or Ray. Update again soon Quote
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