Ludub Posted February 24, 2017 Report Posted February 24, 2017 Kyle isn't too easy to panic, is he?! Surely they could have left their stuff and come back to get it later?! Did they have to spend so long packing everything?! I think if someone came to tell me that there was a murderer hot on my heels, I might be inclined to think that I could live without my tent! lol! And for God's sake Kyle?! Haven't you seen any horror movies?! Don't go back! Never go back! haha! Loving this story! 1 Quote
AtlantaG1912 Posted February 24, 2017 Report Posted February 24, 2017 (edited) 15 minutes ago, Ludub said: Kyle isn't too easy to panic, is he?! Surely they could have left their stuff and come back to get it later?! Did they have to spend so long packing everything?! I think if someone came to tell me that there was a murderer hot on my heels, I might be inclined to think that I could live without my tent! lol! And for God's sake Kyle?! Haven't you seen any horror movies?! Don't go back! Never go back! haha! Loving this story! i felt like the teens had time with derek being asleep to take their stuff lol and i thought it might be funny to have them start going for their stuff as well. thank you for still loving my story as i'm having so much fun with this and the response to it has been great after all it is my first ever fanfic haha. Edited February 24, 2017 by AtlantaG1912 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 25, 2017 Report Posted February 25, 2017 The other teens didn't keep that good a watch on Kyle, did they? At least one of them might have offered to go with him... 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted February 26, 2017 Author Report Posted February 26, 2017 Great chapter Good on Ray for warning the teens Glad Kyle does know about Derek Oh dear! I hope Kyle doesn't walk straight into danger looking for the photo Hoping Derek and his men doesn't caught up to Ray and Kyle Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Ludub Posted February 26, 2017 Report Posted February 26, 2017 Oh dear! now Casey's in danger too! Still, I can understand him wanting to go with Ray, they don't know if they can trust him. Looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens! 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 26, 2017 Report Posted February 26, 2017 Loved the moment where Casey and Phoebe realised that going back for the photo is exactly what Kyle would do.Smart of Casey and Ray to go back for him, unfortunately Kyle's blundered into exactly the sort of trouble he was hoping not to... 1 Quote
Guest Posted February 26, 2017 Report Posted February 26, 2017 Great two chapters. Uh-oh Casey is now in danger too and I don't think trusting Ray was the right thing to do. Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted February 27, 2017 Author Report Posted February 27, 2017 Great chapter Uh oh! Looks like Casey may end up in trouble! Update soon please Xx 1 Quote
Ludub Posted March 25, 2017 Report Posted March 25, 2017 Glad Ray's plan seems to have worked and that Casey found Kyle. Wonder how long it'll take before the guys figure out that they've been tricked? Looking forward to the next chapter. 1 Quote
Guest Posted March 25, 2017 Report Posted March 25, 2017 Great chapter Good Ray's plan seemed to work like Lubud said. Glad Casey found Kyle Update again soon Quote
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