Suzza101 Posted March 30, 2017 Report Posted March 30, 2017 Amazing chapters!! I really hope that everyone is okay, but I have a bad feeling it is no where near the end for Kyle. I feel bad for Ray as he was just trying to help. Can't wait to read more, please update soon. 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 30, 2017 Report Posted March 30, 2017 Ohh boy.Well, I'm glad Ray's okay but he's about the only one that definitely is.Whilst I appreciate the gesture of solidarity (although couldn't they have just rushed Derek through weight of numbers?), it might have been smart for some of the teens to have gone off to get help rather than all waiting for Ray.But hey, hindsight's 20/20 and it probably seemed like a good idea at the time.Hoping they're all okay... 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted March 31, 2017 Author Report Posted March 31, 2017 Poor Ray! Gosh Derek is so scary! Hope the teenagers didn't get hurt or killed in the explosion! Update soon please xx 1 Quote
AtlantaG1912 Posted March 31, 2017 Report Posted March 31, 2017 (edited) 14 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Poor Ray! Gosh Derek is so scary! Hope the teenagers didn't get hurt or killed in the explosion! Update soon please xx Already have the next chapter written out but going to wait a week to post it to give people a chance to catch up. Edited April 1, 2017 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG Quote
Ludub Posted April 1, 2017 Report Posted April 1, 2017 (edited) Oh no!!! The poor kids! I hope they aren't too badly hurt. That's the entire next generation of Summer Bay in peril Hope Brax and Ricky can get there quickly and get the emergency services there in time. Looking forward to the next chapter x Edited April 1, 2017 by Ludub 1 Quote
Ludub Posted April 1, 2017 Report Posted April 1, 2017 Oh wow! Poor Kyle! I hope they can get him out and bring him round. Sounds like he's pretty badly hurt. Some funny moments as well. Evie and Josh were pretty amusing, and i liked April hitting Xavier too. Looking forward to finding out what happens. 1 Quote
Guest Posted April 1, 2017 Report Posted April 1, 2017 Great chapters Poor Kyle I hope they get him out safely. Glad no one else was seriously injured Update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 1, 2017 Report Posted April 1, 2017 Not looking massively good for Kyle, even if the explosion handily took care of most of the bad guys.Hopefully he'll hold on until help arrives. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted April 2, 2017 Author Report Posted April 2, 2017 Great chapter Whoa! I do hope Kyle pulls through this but it looks like it's not looking good for him Glad the other teens are all okay Wondering where Ray had gone to...? Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted May 17, 2017 Report Posted May 17, 2017 Great chapter, I hope that Kyle pulls through.. but it doesn't sound too good but I'm glad that everyone else seems to be okay. Wonder where Ray is? Can't wait to read more please update soon. 1 Quote
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