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Great chapter 

Glad Phoebe and Casey decided to get checked out by paramedics 

Still not looking good for Kyle 

Update again soon :)

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Great chapter 

Poor Kyle I'm worried about him hopefully he makes it through.

Update again soon :)

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Well, it's looking more hopeful for Kyle! At least he made it to the hospital so hopefully they can save him. Really liked how you wrote this scene. I could see everyone standing around waiting for any news and Brax trying desperately to get one of the nurses to stop and talk to him. Looking forward to the next chapter! 

I also just wanted to say that I really hope your friend is okay. That is such a scary thing to have happened to her! :(

 

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5 minutes ago, Ludub said:

Well, it's looking more hopeful for Kyle! At least he made it to the hospital so hopefully they can save him. Really liked how you wrote this scene. I could see everyone standing around waiting for any news and Brax trying desperately to get one of the nurses to stop and talk to him. Looking forward to the next chapter! 

I also just wanted to say that I really hope your friend is okay. That is such a scary thing to have happened to her! :(

 

i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and i will be posting a new one hopefully some point tomorrow.

 

Also thank you, her and her boyfriend are okay apart from a couple of cuts and bruises and being in shock which is understandable but she has been really brave considering she didn't originally want to go the benefit concert but when we got there she started to enjoy herself a bit.

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missed a word out by accident
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