Guest Posted October 8, 2016 Report Posted October 8, 2016 Great chapter Really Enjoyed the brotherly chat. Liked the insight of Kyle when he arrived in the bay. Update again soon Quote
Suzza101 Posted October 8, 2016 Report Posted October 8, 2016 Great chapter absolutely loved the conversation between Casey and Kyle, great brotherly chat. Liked how you mentioned about how Kyle couldn't swim and the part when Heath threw him in. I'm a bit nervous about him learning how to surf. Loved the part with Kyle and Phoebe they are so cute!!!!! Please update soon Quote
Guest Posted October 9, 2016 Report Posted October 9, 2016 Great chapter I wonder who Ray is and what he wants with Kyle. Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted October 9, 2016 Report Posted October 9, 2016 Cute scene with Xavier teasing Oscar. He seems like a bit of a worrier, doesn't he? Wondering who Ray is and what this is all about. You're really building up the suspense. Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
Inactive User Posted October 9, 2016 Author Report Posted October 9, 2016 Awesome chapters Liked the insight of Kyle And I liked the scene between Kyle and Phoebe Loved the cute scene when Xavier teased Oscar Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Quote
Ludub Posted October 9, 2016 Report Posted October 9, 2016 Nice chapter! Loved all the interaction between the teens, especially everyone teasing Kyle and Phoebe about their public displays, and Sasha embarrassing Matt in front of everyone! lol! Love how she called him Matthew Sounds like the girls have some silly pranks planned for the guys too! Hope they don't backfire! That was a bit careless of Ray to bump into Matt like that! He's not great at this whole stake out thing, is he?! haha. Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
Guest Posted October 9, 2016 Report Posted October 9, 2016 Great chapter Loved all the teen banter Update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 10, 2016 Report Posted October 10, 2016 Just caught up on the last three chapters.Ray is interesting, the hints of Kyle's history even more so.Liking the banter between the characters. Quote
Inactive User Posted October 10, 2016 Author Report Posted October 10, 2016 Great chapter Loved the scene when everyone teased Kyle and Phoebe about their public displays Aww poor Matt getting embarrassed by Sasha in front of everyone! Lol! Update soon please xx Quote
Suzza101 Posted October 10, 2016 Report Posted October 10, 2016 Great couple of chapters. Loved how everyone teases Kyle and Phoebe about always kissing in public. I love this fanfic. please update soon. Quote
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