Guest Posted October 18, 2016 Report Posted October 18, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Liked the teens trying to figure out Kyle's past. Wonder who this mum and Callie is Update again soon Edited October 18, 2016 by Kristen Quote
Guest Posted October 18, 2016 Report Posted October 18, 2016 Great chapter Loved Kyle and Phoebe mucking around together. So now Phoebe has heard Ray as well. Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted October 18, 2016 Author Report Posted October 18, 2016 Great chapter Loved the scene when Kyle and Phoebe were having fun mucking around Looking forwards to the next chapter xx 1 Quote
Ludub Posted October 18, 2016 Report Posted October 18, 2016 Oh, good that Kyle is starting to realise that they might not be alone. Ray really isn't too good at this whole stakeout thing, is he?! He also seems to have quite an issue with PDA, haha! Â Looking forward to the next chapter x 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 18, 2016 Report Posted October 18, 2016 People keep hearing things but keep dismissing it... Looking forward to more! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted October 18, 2016 Report Posted October 18, 2016 Great chapter!  Really enjoyed Ray's perspective here. Really worried for Kyle though and wondering why Ray thinks that Kyle deserves to die? Intriguing. Really looking forward to the next chapter! x 1 Quote
AtlantaG1912 Posted October 18, 2016 Report Posted October 18, 2016 24 minutes ago, Ludub said: Great chapter!  Really enjoyed Ray's perspective here. Really worried for Kyle though and wondering why Ray thinks that Kyle deserves to die? Intriguing. Really looking forward to the next chapter! x thank you and i'm glad you are enjoying my first ever fanfic x 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted October 18, 2016 Author Report Posted October 18, 2016 Great chapter Liking Ray's perspective in this fanfiction Really intrigued why he thinks Kyle deserves to die Update soon please xx 1 Quote
AtlantaG1912 Posted October 18, 2016 Report Posted October 18, 2016 31 minutes ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Great chapter Liking Ray's perspective in this fanfiction Really intrigued why he thinks Kyle deserves to die Update soon please xx thank you and i'm glad you are enjoying my first ever fanfic xx Quote
Guest Posted October 19, 2016 Report Posted October 19, 2016 Great chapter Wonder why Ray thinks Kyle deserves to die. Update again soon Quote
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