PumpkinHead (by pembie) - comments

[Guest]

Great chapter

 Chris thinking the brown poo is chocolate.

Matt trying to take care of a panda 

Liked how you added the Astoni family in to this fanfic.

Update again soon

[Kellicopter]

And when I didn't think this story could get any weirder! You continue to surprise me.

Great history lesson, really appreciated that. Also love that Matt is single handedly bringing up this baby that Chris wanted  good job Evie is there to help!

4th wall breaks hilarious yet again. Just can't wait to see what's next.

[Red Ranger 1]

12 hours ago, pembie said:

Are you a fan of Charlie Brown by any chance? I think that was his catchphrase haha

Didn't Dangermouse used to say it as well..?

[pembie]

5 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Didn't Dangermouse used to say it as well..?

Yes he did I'm only more aware of Charlie Brown because my mum's a big fan of him

[JosieTash]

With your intro to that chapter, I was expecting something David Lynch-esque [Twin Peaks, Mulholland Drive, Blue Velvet] ….which it wasn’t quite. I will say you REALLY tried though.

 

I love the bit where Matt was watching the endangered species doco with the panda … that would be like if he had a human child, and they watched “Children Of Men” or “The Handmaid’s Tale” together.

 

Oh, and BIG thanks for the genetics lesson. Now we know why Coco has a thing for mobile phones …. Her muchly, muchly  distant ancestor had same. See, genetics at work !!!!

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh my goodness. Chris entering the bird equivalent of Blind Date to choose a stork to provide him with a child. Well, why not?

[pembie]

9 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Oh my goodness. Chris entering the bird equivalent of Blind Date to choose a stork to provide him with a child. Well, why not?

Oh I'm almost disappointed where's your Charlie Brown/Dangermouse good grief remark?

No thank you

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

I can image Chris entering the bird equivalent of Blind Date, hehe

Update soon please xx

[Guest]

Oh my Chris has the best bits doesn't he entering a blind date of birds and is in the future

This is very entertaining.

Update again soon

 

[Ludub]

Okaaayyyyyy......  I don't know what you were eating / drinking / sniffing when you wrote this but I'm somewhere between being concerned for your well-being and wanting some myself!  Or is this just a glimpse into what's going on in your head on your average day?! This is hilarious!

Cynthia Blue Tits, I'm assuming is a play on Cilla Black in this most weird version of Blind Date. The answers to the dating questions were as weird and as disconcerting as the ones on that show always were. Very funny!

Hannah the nurse getting overexcited and just squatting down to squeeze a human egg or two 'out of her feathery bottom' is a slightly disturbing image  Despite Chris' homosexuality, he's still managed to have a special connection with Hannah, even if she is in bird form! Haha! And I love how Chris just goes with this strange new reality he finds himself in!  So very Chris.

Finally, probably one of my favourite bits is Matt and Chris' conversation at the end there, and Matt giving out to Evie about 'Men'!  Brilliant!

And that closing line... ?

Edited August 30, 2017 by Ludub