pembie Posted August 9, 2017 Report Posted August 9, 2017 (edited) On 09/08/2017 at 18:21, Red Ranger 1 said: That was...slightly bonkers. Mick's a dragon? Well, yeah, that fits.. Expand As I find Mick a pretty lame villain I thought I would be sort of be kind and upgrade him to being really scary Edited August 9, 2017 by pembie Quote
Inactive User Posted August 9, 2017 Report Posted August 9, 2017 Great chapter Loved the part that Mick is a dragon, lol! Update soon please xx Quote
Kellicopter Posted August 9, 2017 Report Posted August 9, 2017 Oh my gee can I please have some of your pain killers? It's weird because this is a story where I'm picturing the people but they're not the same personalities (apart from Alf for some reason!) I love your creativity. 1 Quote
pembie Posted August 10, 2017 Report Posted August 10, 2017 On 09/08/2017 at 23:56, Kellicopter said: It's weird because this is a story where I'm picturing the people but they're not the same personalities (apart from Alf for some reason!) Expand Is that a good thing? I don't know I just go with things I hope will make people keep reading and laugh at As long as its entaining you that's what counts and when I write any story it always turns out abit strange. As for the pain killers I only had them for a short time Enjoy your day if you are getting anymore photos at the beach Quote
Kellicopter Posted August 10, 2017 Report Posted August 10, 2017 On 10/08/2017 at 00:04, pembie said: Is that a good thing? I don't know I just go with things I hope will make people keep reading and laugh at As long as its entaining you that's what counts and when I write any story it always turns out abit strange. As for the pain killers I only had them for a short time Enjoy your day if you are getting anymore photos at the beach Expand Yeah it's a great thing! Means your story is creating a whole new world in my imagination, and the only thing the same is their faces. Ah not today. Will only go on Mon-Weds, only days likely to see anything. 1 Quote
JosieTash Posted August 10, 2017 Report Posted August 10, 2017 Irene going all game of thrones, especially with Mick as her dragon was weird and funny. Billie, the moustache and the posters thing was just …….unique !!!!! Looking fwd to more 1 Quote
Ludub Posted August 12, 2017 Report Posted August 12, 2017 OH. MY. GOD! I love this! I always manage to leave something out but here we go... I love Chris in this chapter! You've written him so well. Totally bonkers, but strangely true to the Chris we all know and love, and I love him and Matt as a gay couple too. Funny that he believes in baby-delivering storks and Harry Potter, but not in dragons, lol! Alf trying to get himself drunk enough to find Irene attractive (depite her puss-filled nose) is probably familiar to people up and down the country, and why people drink so much as a rule! lol! The description of Alf and Irene tonguing was just about as disturbing as it gets! Thanks for that image - I want to wash my brain out now! Brody's constant references to Ash as a dreamboat? I actually think they might make a good couple, although maybe not now that he's a toad haha! Love that his one line is in upper case characters because Ash is incapable of speaking at a normal level ...and Kat? Well, you know how much I love her? So sad that she's been reduced to a pile of ash. I would have high-fived Chris for that joke absolutely! 1 Quote
pembie Posted August 12, 2017 Report Posted August 12, 2017 On 12/08/2017 at 22:44, Ludub said: The description of Alf and Irene tonguing was just about as disturbing as it gets! Thanks for that image - I want to wash my brain out now! Brody's constant references to Ash as a dreamboat? I actually think they might make a good couple, although maybe not now that he's a toad haha! Love that his one line is in upper case characters because Ash is incapable of speaking at a normal level ...and Kat? Well, you know how much I love her? So sad that she's been reduced to a pile of ash. I would have high-fived Chris for that joke absolutely! Expand Oh well seeing as you often say I'm very good at bringing the imagey of my stories alive I thought I would test that out with Alf and Irene kissing and I needed a way to get Irene to sober up for a moment as drinking anything other than Pumpkinjice is a weakness haha Oh and I think Alf got drunk because he had just been riding on a dragon haha I hadn't thought of him still wanting to get his leg over haha As for Chris not believing in dragons well there's has to be a line drawn somewhere 1 Quote
Guest Posted August 12, 2017 Report Posted August 12, 2017 Great chapter liked the mention of cat in the hat Alf and Irene kissing yuck. Ash being turned into a toad Update again soon Quote
pembie Posted August 12, 2017 Report Posted August 12, 2017 On 12/08/2017 at 23:36, Kristen said: Great chapter liked the mention of cat in the hat Alf and Irene kissing yuck. Ash being turned into a toad Update again soon Expand There were quite a few Cat puns Quote
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