Red Ranger 1 Posted August 18, 2017 Report Posted August 18, 2017 Oh man! Tori thinking Nate's hideous and his dropping chat-up lines moments are being defrogged.Chris trapping them in a time loop.Evelyn getting Matt a baby panda.Insanity! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted August 18, 2017 Report Posted August 18, 2017 OH MY GOD! I loved this! Brody and his Bart Simpson pants! (I'm obviously a bit slow because I literally only just got the connection between them and his old name! duh!) Loved him reappearing like a 'whack a mole'. Very nice imagery there! haha! He has a bit of a meerkat look about him! I'm glad he took my suggestion though, and went for a knife instead of a weaponry mostly made up of small red fruits Although maybe it still hasn't done him any good. Irene knowing how sexy fishnet tights are because of the dating shows that Chris makes her watch?! lol! I have to say, once again, thanks for that mental image Pembie! So Tori thinks that licking a toad is preferable to kissing one?! I'm really not sure that either option appeals that much, but surely licking would be a lot worse?! Mind you, from your description of their kiss, she might be right! I literally spat my drink out at this! lol! 1 hour ago, pembie said: Given the writer of this story has the whole timeline of this madness all out of whack and I loved this: 1 hour ago, pembie said: Matt looks slightly taken back. “I hope that Chris is potty trained already” “The panda bear I meant the blooming bear Matt” Where do you get these ideas from?! Oh, and my lovely Chris wreaking havoc and trapping everyone in a time loop?! Kind of reminded me of the scene in Father Ted where Dougal just can't resist pressing that big red button that says 'do not press'. Can you blame him really?! Don't put big shiny buttons on things if you don't want people to press them. Love how bouncy and silly Chris is in this (so true to character). I don't blame Matt for running off with him instead of Evie, not one bit! I've probably missed loads of bits out that I meant to comment on. Just very funny! 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted August 18, 2017 Report Posted August 18, 2017 Great chapter Loved it! I can image Brody in his Bart Simpson pants, haha. Awww Evelyn getting Matt a baby panda Update soon please xx 1 Quote
pembie Posted August 18, 2017 Report Posted August 18, 2017 On 16/08/2017 at 9:15 PM, pembie said: Before you shout noooooooooooo Do bear in mind that this is a comedy and very silly and thought up by me Do Bear in mind Get it Bear as in Panda bear haha did you pick up on the clue? 1 Quote
Ludub Posted August 18, 2017 Report Posted August 18, 2017 1 minute ago, pembie said: Do Bear in mind Get it Bear as in Panda bear haha did you pick up on the clue? Nope! hahahahahaha! You're smarter than the average bear, aren't you? 1 Quote
pembie Posted August 18, 2017 Report Posted August 18, 2017 Better than being a bear with a sore head Quote
Guest Posted August 18, 2017 Report Posted August 18, 2017 Great chapter Brody in his Bart Simpson boxers It was cute that Evelyn gave Matt a baby panda. Update again soon Quote
pembie Posted August 19, 2017 Report Posted August 19, 2017 28 minutes ago, Kellicopter said: I just can't even. Did you in your wildest dreams ever expect to find a story like this on here? Quote
JosieTash Posted August 21, 2017 Report Posted August 21, 2017 Brody and his jenga’d tomatoes were funny, and I must admit, I missed the whole Bart thing. Can’t help but love the panda bit, and Nate speaking a bit like a fog [the inclusion of the ribit] and “I have heard that licking a toad can make you high, how about I do that instead?” Tori asks, was coooooool too Sooooooo funny and cooooooooooooooool Quote
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