pembie Posted April 20, 2015 Author Report Posted April 20, 2015 I'm not going to lie but I do like Mark in this story. So I'm hoping his smart enough not to fall for Roman's trap right away. I'm still rooting for Ella somehow taking him down when the time comes for his demise. Quote
Inactive User Posted April 21, 2015 Report Posted April 21, 2015 Great chapter Update soon please xx Quote
pollymoon Posted April 21, 2015 Report Posted April 21, 2015 (edited) I love this story so thrilled to see an update - hope they can get to Mark before he hurts anyone else - more soon please. xxxxxxxx Edited April 21, 2015 by QUIET ACHIEVER Please use capital letters for names. Quote
pollymoon Posted June 23, 2015 Report Posted June 23, 2015 Tele - delighted to see this updated and another great part - so glad that Pete was able to help Ella see that Roman is just protecting her - I hope that Roman can keep himself safe from Mark - more soon please xxxxxxxxxxx Quote
Inactive User Posted June 23, 2015 Report Posted June 23, 2015 Great chapter I agree with Pollymoon's comment above ^Update soon please xx Quote
Zetti Posted June 24, 2015 Report Posted June 24, 2015 “This isn’t as much fun as I expected,” Mark muttered. “Murder usually isn’t,” Roman drawled. Haha, yeah I totally agree with that. As much as I don't like Mark, their banter is quite funny. I wonder how long it will take for Mark to twig that Roman has his sight back..Ella and Pete.. well she's seeing that Roman is trying to protect her but of course she is stubborn. Looking forward to more Update soooooon please! Quote
pembie Posted June 26, 2015 Author Report Posted June 26, 2015 Roman was very brave there with Mark pointing his gun right at his head. I hope Ella goes back to the bay.. She needs to go kick Mark's ass. But not too soon I do like Mark even though I'm probably not meant too. Quote
pembie Posted August 31, 2015 Author Report Posted August 31, 2015 Oh for awhile there I thought Mike was going to be targeted and taken out somehow. Its quite strange that there's that fingerprint on his car. I get the feeling something huge is going to happen before the end of this story. Quote
Inactive User Posted September 1, 2015 Report Posted September 1, 2015 Great chapterI agree with Pembie's comment above ^Update soon please xx Quote
Zetti Posted September 1, 2015 Report Posted September 1, 2015 Uh oh. Mark. he needs to take a long walk off a short plank. Quote
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