Inactive User Posted January 19, 2014 Report Posted January 19, 2014 Great chapter. Update soon please xx Quote
Zetti Posted January 19, 2014 Report Posted January 19, 2014 Firstly I am so glad Rola is back, I have totally missed reading about them! Secondly, its Mark? and he's alive? How? What? When? Why? Love Ella even more especially by the way she isn't giving up. Now all Roman needs to do is wake up! Really looking forward to reading more. Quote
ldscott Posted January 19, 2014 Report Posted January 19, 2014 Mark! I thought it might be him, I wonder what he's going to do? Love the mp3 at the end and roman's protection of his family even with him being blind Fab chapter Tele, can't wait to read more Lisa x Quote
pembie Posted January 19, 2014 Author Report Posted January 19, 2014 Hmm so Mark isn't a ghost or a figment of Roman's imagination turns out his very much alive. Very clever writing, upto this point of the story I felt confused trying to work out who that ghost was I look forward to seeing how a blind Roman manages to take Mark down. I'm sure he will having beat all his past enemies. Quote
pollymoon Posted January 20, 2014 Report Posted January 20, 2014 So it isn't a ghost after all and now that Roman realises this I think we will start to see him get his act together, I hope that he gets his sight back soon, and hopefully Mark will stay away from his family, great to see an update here, more soon please Tele, such a great story xxxxxx Quote
Inactive User Posted February 6, 2014 Report Posted February 6, 2014 Great chapter Update soon please xx Quote
Zetti Posted February 7, 2014 Report Posted February 7, 2014 (edited) Jacko.. can I just take a moment to grin at the fact that Jacko is in this chapter. Oh I have missed him.. I am certain that the four of them will manage to knock some sense into Roman, but if they need a helping hand I volunteer myself to help! They should be familiar with the smile it was the one that Lily presented just before she got one of them into trouble. Like making Pete climb up on the garage after the teddy bear she’d slingshot out of the attic window and then telling everyone that Jacko had thrown the bear out.Yeah, that kind of innocent. This is just hilarious, I can totally see Lily dong this! I can't stop giggling! So looking forward to more! Edited February 7, 2014 by Zetti Quote
pollymoon Posted February 7, 2014 Report Posted February 7, 2014 Oh Tele, great to see an update on this story, really glad that they are starting to figure out that something else is going on, hope they can help Roman, more soo please. xxxx Quote
ldscott Posted February 7, 2014 Report Posted February 7, 2014 Great chapter Tele, glad the boys are helping and live how Ella can cause pain without having to do anything! Can't wait to read more xx Quote
pembie Posted February 8, 2014 Author Report Posted February 8, 2014 Oh so just been reading the last part of Postcards again. Because of Jacko saying something may of happened back at the house when Roman was looking through his mail. I seemed to totally missed the fact that, Mark was following Roman and Ella while they were in Hawaii. Am I right about that or just making things up now? Lilly with her slingshot made me laugh. Quote
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