ldscott Posted May 11, 2014 Report Posted May 11, 2014 Great couple of chapters Tele. glad they are getting somewhere with working out what set off the blindness. Can't wait to find out where Mark is and what he wants!! Lisa x Quote
pembie Posted May 14, 2014 Author Report Posted May 14, 2014 (edited) Sorry I didn't realise you had updated I'm giving you the right to ban me I will have to think of some kind of superhero group name, abit like the justice league for Ella and the guys I love the way she has teamed up with them to try and track Mark down. I'm looking forward to seeing what Mark's next move is. I'm sort of hoping for a showdown where Ella goes all badass on him Edited May 14, 2014 by pembie Quote
pollymoon Posted May 19, 2014 Report Posted May 19, 2014 Another brilliant part Tele, hope that they will have proof now that it is Mark and that they can get Roman the help he needs, more soon please xxxxx Quote
Inactive User Posted June 13, 2014 Report Posted June 13, 2014 Great chapter, Tele Update soon please xx Quote
pollymoon Posted June 13, 2014 Report Posted June 13, 2014 Tele, so thrilled to see a new update, I just love Lily even when she is being bold, she is such a character, so glad that Jacko and the boys now know about Mark, really love this story, more soon please. xxxxx Quote
Zetti Posted June 13, 2014 Report Posted June 13, 2014 “Let me get this straight? You can’t handle my daughter but you want me to enrol her in a martial arts class? Because teaching her how to kill people would be a good thing for her?”Lily lifted her head and gave them both an innocent smile. Love love love Lily, I can totally imagine her innocent smile! That could properly definitely start wars! I love Jacko keeping check on Roman, he's just awesome! Love the chapter and definitely looking forward to more Quote
pembie Posted June 13, 2014 Author Report Posted June 13, 2014 Loved the scene with Ella and Lilly's ballet teacher The poor woman seemed on the verge of going into full on meltdown mode. While I would love to see Lilly take up karate lessons I wouldn't mind seeing Lilly carry on ballet that would be very amusing. Lilly in Military school would also be great I totally would trust her with a gun I thought the scene with Roman and Mark was brilliant too. Mark can keep pushing things for Roman thats fine It all makes it better for when Roman or Ella take Mark out. Thanks for basing this update around my 2nd fav character Lilly, my first being Ella of course. Quote
Zetti Posted June 29, 2014 Report Posted June 29, 2014 Hypnosis sounds like a good idea for Roman. I want him to fight back! Mikey! He's just awesome but I Iove the blindfold thing he did. Effective. Looking forward to more Quote
Inactive User Posted June 29, 2014 Report Posted June 29, 2014 Great chapter, Tele Looking forwards to the next chapter xx Quote
pollymoon Posted June 29, 2014 Report Posted June 29, 2014 Another great chapter Tele - really love this story - really hope that the kids can get to see Roman soon - so obvious that they really miss him, more soon please xxxxxxxxxxxxx Quote
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