pembie Posted June 29, 2014 Author Report Posted June 29, 2014 Oh cool maybe Roman could become the deadly blind assassin. No let's hope his sight returns soon. Maybe if he went for hipgnosis it would help him find the cause behind his blindness. It was cool that he was doing his martial arts Quote
Zetti Posted July 18, 2014 Report Posted July 18, 2014 I love the chapter, it was very good. I love how Ella was goading Mark without even really trying that was skill! Jacko is still awesome! He's definitely a favourite of mine! Looking forward to more soon Quote
Inactive User Posted July 18, 2014 Report Posted July 18, 2014 Great chapter, Tele Update soon please xx Quote
ldscott Posted July 20, 2014 Report Posted July 20, 2014 O Dear, think Pete is gonna be in trouble when he goes home! Great chapter Tele, Love that Ella may have scared Mark a bit. Hope Georgie is ok after spensing some time away. Can't wait to read what happens next Lisa x Quote
pembie Posted July 23, 2014 Author Report Posted July 23, 2014 Good on Ella for scaring Mark I do wonder though if it will somehow backfire on her. Didn't sound good when Mark said he hadn't even started on what he has planned for them yet, I don't hold out much hope of Charlie helping them out here that much. Mark's downfall will come about either by Roman or Ella I think. Look forward to your next chapter Quote
pollymoon Posted July 23, 2014 Report Posted July 23, 2014 Oh yes an update Tele, another great part - Hope they can get Mark away from Roman so that he and Ella can spend some time together - please update again soon, love this story xxx Quote
Zetti Posted August 28, 2014 Report Posted August 28, 2014 (edited) My heart just literally shattered into pieces. Roman is an idiot, a really stupid idiot.. but poor Ella! Imagine finding out your husband kept something like that from you. I don't know what Ella is going to do next but I don't want the children to suffer.. Hope you update soon Edited August 28, 2014 by Zetti Quote
Inactive User Posted August 29, 2014 Report Posted August 29, 2014 Great chapter Not happy with Roman. He's such a idiot! Felt sorry for Ella Update soon please Xxx Quote
pollymoon Posted August 29, 2014 Report Posted August 29, 2014 Delighted to see an update, not so delighted to read that Roman has yet again kept another secret from Ella, I really hope that they can work through this - please update again soon. Love this story xxxxxx Quote
pembie Posted August 30, 2014 Author Report Posted August 30, 2014 Cool Roman has a love child I think that's cool nice twist that the mother is Mark's wife Just another motive to why Mark would go after him. Very cool scene with Charlie, Pete and George. Let's hope that Charlie and Pete do get married sooner the better that it happens I'm thinking before trouble hits the fan. Quote
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