Love That Could Tear the Bay Apart (by sallyandflynnfan) - comments

[christine king]

Great start. I'm guessing this is just a Brody/Phoebe/Justin story? I think you have to do like an intro so people know who's in the story? What's it about? What grade ect? What themes?

[sallyandflynnfan]

  On 07/07/2017 at 08:46, christine king said:

Great start. I'm guessing this is just a Brody/Phoebe/Justin story? I think you have to do like an intro so people know who's in the story? What's it about? What grade ect? What themes?

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How can you get an info in the story also yeah it mainly Phoebe and brody and justin but because of an event  something in the bay will change

[christine king]

  On 07/07/2017 at 08:48, sallyandflynnfan said:

How can you get an info in the story also yeah it mainly Phoebe and brody and justin but because of an event  something in the bay will change

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All the info you need is in the fanfiction rules at the top of the fanfiction page.

 

[Inactive User]

Great start to this new fanfiction  Looking forwards to the next one

[Guest]

Great start.

I look forward to more.

Update again soon

[sallyandflynnfan]

  On 07/07/2017 at 20:30, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Great start to this new fanfiction  Looking forwards to the next one

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I glad you like it

  On 08/07/2017 at 00:10, Kristen said:

Great start.

I look forward to more.

Update again soon

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Thanks and glad you like it. I updating it tommorow 

 

 

 

 

Edited July 8, 2017 by sallyandflynnfan

[Ludub]

Good start, and an interesting idea. I do think it would be better if the chapters were a little longer though, or maybe had more than one scene. Just a suggestion. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.

[Guest]

Great chapter

Liked that you brought Heath back.

Shocked Phoebe doesn't love Justin anymore I have a feeling she might have a thing for Brody.

Update again soon

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Shocked that Phoebe told Justin that she didn't love her anymore in front of everyone. She should have told him in private instead of letting it out in front of people. Can't wait to see how he will react to it.

Update soon please xx

[sallyandflynnfan]

  On 09/07/2017 at 05:45, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Great chapter

Shocked that Phoebe told Justin that she didn't love her anymore in front of everyone. She should have told him in private instead of letting it out in front of people. Can't wait to see how he will react to it.

Update soon please xx

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You have to wait to find out it not how you should think he would 

  On 09/07/2017 at 04:34, Kristen said:

Great chapter

Liked that you brought Heath back.

Shocked Phoebe doesn't love Justin anymore I have a feeling she might have a thing for Brody.

Update again soon

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Yeah Heath gonna play a major part in the story who knows another braxton brother might return and maybe she does like Brody