FootyKick Posted October 30, 2018 Author Report Posted October 30, 2018 Chapter Four (Palmer House) Raffy comes in, to visit John and Marilyn "Oh Raffy, nice to see you, would you like to stay for dinner?" asked Marilyn. Raffy remains silent "Everything alright sweetheart?" asked Marilyn. "Hey, what's with all the blood on your hand?" asked a suspicious John. "Um, I tripped when I was getting out of the car" said Raffy. "Well, I can ask Justin if we can take you to the hospital tomorrow to get your hand checked out when Marilyn goes to get her check-up?" asked John. "What's wrong with Marilyn" asked a nervous Raffy. "Silly John thinks that something is wrong with me" replied Marilyn bluntly. "I'll leave you guys to it but see you later" said Raffy. "Bye" said John and Marilyn in unison. (Police Station) Alf and Roo are waiting for Ryder and Sergeant Watson to come out of the interview room. They then come out. "How did you go mate?" asked Alf. Ryder remained silent and looked at the Sergeant. Watson said "I would like to introduce you to the newest member of the police academy, Ryder Jackson." "Oh, that's great darling" said Roo. Roo went on, "So when does he begin training at the academy?" "Well you better get a good night's sleep Ryder, as training starts at Goulburn 10:00am sharp, led by Inspector Mike Emerson and Senior Constable Xavier Austin" said Watson. "Well on that note, we best be of, thanks Georgie" said Alf.
Guest Posted October 30, 2018 Report Posted October 30, 2018 Great chapter Raffy lying to John and Marilyn about what happened to her hand Marilyn denying anything is wrong Update again soon
D.B Posted October 30, 2018 Report Posted October 30, 2018 I wonder why Raffy lied to John and Marilyn what happened to her hand, she needs to tell someone, for both her sakes and Colby's. It's great to see Ryder joining the police academy, and I really like the mention of Emerson and Xavier. I look forward to the next chapter.
Inactive User Posted October 30, 2018 Report Posted October 30, 2018 Great chapter Surprised that Raffy lied to John and Marilyn about what happened to her hand. Wondering how Raffy is going to act around Colby from on now? Looking forwards to the next chapter
FootyKick Posted November 1, 2018 Author Report Posted November 1, 2018 Chapter Five (Pier Flat) The morning after, Colby has just had a shower and has just realised the extent of what he has done. John is at the door to see Colby. "John, hi" said a nervous Colby, worried that Raffy has told him. "Sorry to just drop around like this mate, but I need to ask you something" said John. "You and Raffy have been hanging out a bit, recently right?" asked John. "Yeah, how come?" asked a nervous Colby. "Something's not right with her mate, she came around last night with a bloodied hand and seemed very shaken up, do you know what that might be about?" asked John. "No, sorry, I wish I could help" said Colby. "Anyways, best be off, sorry to bother you mate" said John. (Palmer House) Marilyn has just been to her doctor's appointment and her and John discuss the situation. "Marilyn, I'm so sorry darling, I should've guessed it sooner rather than later, given how you were behaving" said a sympathetic John. "No once could have done anything or knew that I had Borderline Personality Disorder" said Marilyn. "And the good thing is, is that Tori said you haven't displayed many of the symptoms yet, but unfortunately over time they will come" said John. "I might go to the Diner and grab us some lunch aye?" asked a hungry John. "No, no...please don't leave me like this" said Marilyn in a worried state. "But I'll only be like thirty minutes" said John. "No, no..." said Marilyn, having a mini-panic attack. (Outside the Police Academy) Ryder is saying his goodbyes to Alf and Roo before he starts his training. "Guys, I just wanted to say thank you for everything, and I guess I'll see you in a few weeks" said an excited Ryder. "You just enjoy yourself and be good" said Roo. "And don't go binge drinking any of their beer" joked Alf. "Haha, see you" said Ryder.
Guest Posted November 1, 2018 Report Posted November 1, 2018 Great chapter Can't believe Colby lied to John So Marilyn is sick. Aww bye Ryder. Update again soon
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 1, 2018 Report Posted November 1, 2018 Ah, wasn't expecting Marilyn to have a mental health issue! Things more than a little awkward for Colby that but at least he feels bad.
Inactive User Posted November 1, 2018 Report Posted November 1, 2018 Great chapter Surprised that Marilyn has mental issues. Wondering how she and John are going to cope with it from on now? Looking forwards to the next chapter
FootyKick Posted November 6, 2018 Author Report Posted November 6, 2018 Chapter Six (Surf Club) Raffy is enjoying playing a game of pool when the police arrive. "Raffy Morrison?" asked Sergeant Watson. "Yes" said Raffy. "I'm placing you under arrest for the assault on Colby Thorne" replied Georgie. "You can't be serious, he's the one who tried to make a move on me!" insisted Raffy. "There is no evidence of that" "You are not obliged to say or do anything, but anything you do say or do may be used against you in a court of law. Do you understand?" Raffy is handcuffed and hauled away, Alf and Roo look on shocked (Police Station Interview Room) "This is a joke, I just want to go home please" pleaded Raffy. "I'm sorry, that's not possible" said Georgie. "How did you even find out about this?" asked Raffy. "When he came into work yesterday, he seemed very weird, and when I asked him about it, he eventually cracked and told me about you assaulting him" said Watson. Raffy begins to cry "Can I call anyone, your siblings, John and Marilyn?" asked a compassionate Watson. "No" insisted Raffy. "So, will I be charged?" asked Raffy. "Yes" said Watson. "Ok, but I can go home now right?" asked Raffy. "I'm sorry, but for the time being, we have to lock you up" said Georgie. Not wanting to be locked up, Raffy runs out of the station, the officers in chase (Palmer House) John comes back into the house "Maz, I'm back" said John. The house remained silent. "You here Maz?" asked John. John searched the house for her, and found a note on the table left for him "Oh no" said John. The note read: John, I'm sorry, I've decided to move to Paris and live the rest of my life over there. Please don't come and look for me.
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 6, 2018 Report Posted November 6, 2018 Raffy being arrested is ridiculous, Georgie needs to get her facts straight.Surprised at Marilyn walking out on John.
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