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1 hour ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Nice couple of chapters. Alf did jump to conclusions somewhat, although it looks like things could be strained between him and Frank anyway. Liked Matt looking after Sally. And awkward at Danny turning up at the end...

Maybe they are ?

I also added a bit more to the conversation between Bobby and Sally at the diner.

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Great chapter 

Liked the chat between Bobby and Sally.

Danny turning up at the end was a bit of a suprise.

Update again soon :)

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Loved this chap the stuff with Matt and Frank was good alongside the stuff with Alisa and Frank Pippa and Frank and Bobby and Sal and Bobby and Matt. Update soon pls

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Great chapter

hmm Roo ignoring Frank's messaged was a bit strange.

Liked Martin's reaction to Danny.

Update again soon :)

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3 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Huh.Roo ignoring Frank's message was a bit odd.Martin's reaction to Danny was typically him.Lots of nice character moments.

 

46 minutes ago, Kristen said:

Great chapter

hmm Roo ignoring Frank's messaged was a bit strange.

Liked Martin's reaction to Danny.

Update again soon :)

Sorry, for some reason, I forgot to copy and paste the flashback which gives more clarification , I have edited that part now :)

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