Red Ranger 1 Posted July 21, 2018 Report Posted July 21, 2018 Michael and Celia?! Floss and Neville make a sharp exit. Frank trying with Roo but not really there. Dodge causing trouble... 1 Quote
Guest Posted July 22, 2018 Report Posted July 22, 2018 Great chapter cant believe Dodge stole the money but didn't tell Pippa Dodge is really a bad influence on Steve Update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 22, 2018 Report Posted July 22, 2018 Well, everyone seems to be moving forward, which at least in Steven's case is not a good thing, and things seem to have taken a turn for the sinister between Ben and Marilyn.Good news about Sandra. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted July 22, 2018 Report Posted July 22, 2018 Great chapter Whoa is Ben becoming abusive towards Marilyn?? Not liking Dodge at all Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Summer's Bay Posted July 23, 2018 Report Posted July 23, 2018 30,000 views? WOW! THANK YOU so much to those who have read my words. I am really enjoying writing this fanfiction. Thank you for staying on this ride with me, there is still so much more to come, lots of surprises and the introduction of more characters. A new chapter will be up tonight or tomorrow morning. Quote
CaptainHulk Posted July 24, 2018 Report Posted July 24, 2018 Potentially Abusive Ben... I don't know how to feel. On screen, He'd be more likely to use a fist on a guy and bark at a woman. His parents would be ashamed, if what I think is going on. They seemed like they would suitably chastise him for that. Revhead in the mix, interesting. The McPhees gone... Pity, but sometimes you gotta follow what's in your heart. This is a great 1990 Alternate universe fic and everyone likes seeing how it unfolds. Most of everyone is how they were with a few tweaks and small timeline liberties. 1 Quote
Guest Posted July 25, 2018 Report Posted July 25, 2018 Great chapter a lot going on! So Barbra had a miscarriage and is hiding it by pretending to still be pregnant? Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted July 25, 2018 Report Posted July 25, 2018 Great chapter Whoa looks like there is a lot of things going on in this chapter Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 25, 2018 Report Posted July 25, 2018 Martin's proposal didn't go so well then. Thought something might happen to Sally for a minute.Woah, so Barbara's had a miscarriage? 1 Quote
CaptainHulk Posted July 25, 2018 Report Posted July 25, 2018 Holy s***.... I can actually see a desperate/panicked/scared Barbara doing the whole padding thing. That would be the freeze frame. I like "Breakout", One of the best 80s tunes. There's an extended mix with a pretty sweet guitar solo toward the end of the track. Ooh, Stevo's going off the rails quicker than one of Thomas the Tank Engine or his mates when they go too fast! Megan Tierney pops in, Nice to add the "H" to avoid confusion with the other Megan. 1 Quote
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