Guest Posted August 10, 2018 Report Posted August 10, 2018 (edited) Great chapter Liked the chat between Pippa and Ailsa oh no Dodge has really done it this time Update again soon Edited August 10, 2018 by Kristen Quote
Inactive User Posted August 10, 2018 Report Posted August 10, 2018 Great chapter Nice conversation between Ailsa and Pippa Looking forwards to the next chapter 1 Quote
Guest Posted August 11, 2018 Report Posted August 11, 2018 (edited) Great chapter oh so Geoff is serious wonder how Bobby will feel? What is Revhead up too? Oh no Frank didn't get Sally's message Update again soon Edited August 11, 2018 by Kristen Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 11, 2018 Report Posted August 11, 2018 Looks like Dodge may have made a dangerous enemy... Roo's playabout with the machine, I assume. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted August 11, 2018 Report Posted August 11, 2018 Great chapter Such a pity that Frank didn't get Sally's message 1 Quote
Summer's Bay Posted August 11, 2018 Report Posted August 11, 2018 33,000 views? WOW! Thank you very much for reading my words. I am really enjoying writing this fanfiction and there is much more to come. I hope to have a new chapter up by tonight. Quote
Guest Posted August 12, 2018 Report Posted August 12, 2018 (edited) Great chapter oh no Roo deleted Sally's message Oh no Revhead has Sally I hope she will be okay Update again soon Edited August 12, 2018 by Kristen Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 12, 2018 Report Posted August 12, 2018 Matt was out of line with Rebecca. Revhead seems to have picked the wrong hostage, although if Steven leaves her then he really is gone. Ah, so the answering machine wasn't working but Roo's habit of deleting messages continues. 1 Quote
CaptainHulk Posted August 12, 2018 Report Posted August 12, 2018 Man, things have taken a turn for the grim! Sal's at Revhead's mercy, Matt's getting physical with Rebecca. Though if it was Danielle Carter edition Rebecca, she'd knock him flat! I like how you made Revhead more threatening than he was on screen. More in line with his 1991 self anyhow. Damn you, Roo. I can just see her doing this with the same kind of s***-eating grin she had when she came up with the plan to frame Frank as Martha's father. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted August 12, 2018 Report Posted August 12, 2018 Great chapter Can't believe how selfish Roo is when she deleted Sally's message and lied to Frank about it! I hope Sally will be okay. Update soon please xx 1 Quote
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