Inactive User Posted January 10, 2018 Report Posted January 10, 2018 Great chapter Oh dear. Still wondering why Sally is scared of Danny. Liked how everyone made peace Update soon please xx 1 Quote
KKB Posted January 10, 2018 Report Posted January 10, 2018 Great chap. Poor Sal wonder what Danny had done. Update soon 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 10, 2018 Report Posted January 10, 2018 Liked the little bit between Steven and Rebecca.The characters don't quite seem to know where to turn.Not sure why Sally reacted like that to Danny. 1 Quote
CaptainHulk Posted January 10, 2018 Report Posted January 10, 2018 Great. The Caravan Park Kerfuffle seems believable on screen, I can just see the rest running as soon as Sal gives out a bloodcurdling scream. Complete with Perjanik Doom Piano 1. Followers by that tense string arrangement followed by a light cymbal before the break /freeze frame I can also see Roo smirking like the cat that got the Canary. The sane smirk Nirag gives off when she's being devious. Matt sneaking in and out.. Understandable but at this point in time he and Carls would be 19-20 (despite her still being at school, giving Y12 a third go). Could have been real awkward if Sal had one of her nightmares and wanted to get in with Carly, though. 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 12, 2018 Report Posted January 12, 2018 Frank was a bit annoying in his reaction to Bobby and Danny so I kind of enjoyed seeing him get wound up.Rebecca being around could throw a few spanners in the works for Don.Looking forward to more! 1 Quote
KKB Posted January 12, 2018 Report Posted January 12, 2018 Wonder if that was a girl Matt was talking too. Update soon 1 Quote
Guest Posted January 12, 2018 Report Posted January 12, 2018 Great chapter Frank was a bit obnoxious with Bobby and Danny. Wonder  who Matt was talking too. Update again soon  Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 13, 2018 Report Posted January 13, 2018 Bit of a shock for Rebecca there but she handled it okay!Frank was out of line with Bobby. 1 Quote
Guest Posted January 13, 2018 Report Posted January 13, 2018 Great chapter That wasn't very nice the way Frank treated Bobby. Like RR1 said but of a shock for Rebecca. Update again soon Quote
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