Undenying Love (by sallyandflynnfan) - comments

[sallyandflynnfan]

Just now, Kristen said:

Great chapter

do I hint Brody getting jealous?

Liked the sisterly moment between Ziggy and Coco.

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Yes Brody getting jealous and this is just the start

Glad you like the moment between Ziggy and Coco

Glad your liking the story so far

11 minutes ago, chair said:

Thanks. You're great at interweaving lots of plots. I'm not good at that. I'm trying to write Part 2 of my fanfic but it's still in my head at the moment.

Thanks so much. I honestly just think of plots the moment before I start writing each chapter. Omg I cant wait to read part 2 of yours as it one of my favourite fanfictions

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Brody is getting jealous of Ziggy and Vincent but I ship them in this story.

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[Guest]

Great chapter 

I ship Ziggy and Vincent 

it was nice of Vincent to drive Ziggy home well to the diner first 

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Edited December 19, 2018 by Kristen

[Chair]

Thanks for the updates. Does Simone exist in this update?  I am still curious why Ziggy is ignoring the rest of her family.

[Chair]

Thanks for the update. I hope Ziggy will be honest soon.

 

(I guess they might have to rule out swimming if it's too soon after Ziggy's appendix operation. I don't know how bad hers was. My appendix burst but tissue still around it. I had my stitches out a week later.)

 

ETA: Though it's quite possible there are the healing powers in the Bay at hand.

Edited December 19, 2018 by chair

[sallyandflynnfan]

1 hour ago, chair said:

Thanks for the update. I hope Ziggy will be honest soon.

 

(I guess they might have to rule out swimming if it's too soon after Ziggy's appendix operation. I don't know how bad hers was. My appendix burst but tissue still around it. I had my stitches out a week later.)

 

ETA: Though it's quite possible there are the healing powers in the Bay at hand.

She might not know that she falling for him yet

Who knows Vincent might be honest with her first

As for swimming it might or might not happen

Glad your liking this story

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Brody is jealous.

Ziggy is playing a dangerous game.

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[Chair]

Thanks for the update. I enjoyed Ziggy and Vincent hanging out together. I do like both Brody and Vincent though.

[Guest]

Great chapter

Liked Ziggy and Vincent hanging out.

I do feel a bit sorry for Brody though.

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[Guest]

Wow heated moment between Brody and Ziggy there.

Liked Ziggy finding Vincent at the beach.

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