Maybe Too Close? (by D.B) - comments

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Liked how the whole town were supportive of Denny and Ricky

Oh dear so now Brax is back in town. Wondering how he will react to both Denny and Ricky as a couple

Update soon please xx

[pembie]

Brax is back is he? If you had added abit of mystery there I would have guessed at it being Olivia come back with revenge in mind she would be very put out that she's not desgining Tamara's wedding dress haha.

Brax is going to be utterly gobsmacked and I'm looking forward to that

[Guest]

Great chapter

liked the interaction between Ricky and Brax

Right on point  Denny walking in wonder how Brax will react 

Update again soon  

[Helena]

I can't believe that brax has found out about Ricky and Denny I'm pretty sure that brax will be extremely angry can't wait to read more

[pembie]

Ah it could have been worse Brax could have climbed through the bedroom window to find Ricky and Denny sleeping together or gotten in bed with Denny when Ricky was going to the toilet one night haha So really he found out about them in the kindest sort of way lol

I wondered at the time would Ricky really be happy with Brax when he come to fetch her in the show Or would he just be back in trouble now

[Red Ranger 1]

Brax took a bit of time to grasp the situation, but Denny coming home at an awkward moment pretty much sorted it!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Whoa that was so awkward at the end. Can't wait to see how Brax will react to it.

Update soon please xx

[D.B]

  On 09/09/2018 at 21:37, Red Ranger 1 said:

Brax took a bit of time to grasp the situation,,

Expand  

 

  On 09/09/2018 at 12:11, Kristen said:

Great chapter

liked the interaction between Ricky and Brax

Expand  

Thanks Red and Kristen. I felt the things Ricky said to Brax were very important because, to be honest, Brax has always had that feeling that his actions were justified just because it was for his family, so I felt like it was time for him to hear some truths (as what I think should have happened in the show). So I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

  On 09/09/2018 at 12:13, Mcgarry.helena@yahoo.com said:

I can't believe that brax has found out about Ricky and Denny I'm pretty sure that brax will be extremely angry can't wait to read more

Expand  

  On 09/09/2018 at 21:37, Red Ranger 1 said:

 but Denny coming home at an awkward moment pretty much sorted it!

Expand  

 

  On 09/09/2018 at 21:51, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Great chapter

Whoa that was so awkward at the end. Can't wait to see how Brax will react to it.

Update soon please xx

Expand  

Yeah I couldn't help leaving it at a awkward cliffhanger like that! I don't think Brax's going to just accept though.

  On 09/09/2018 at 18:08, pembie said:

Ah it could have been worse Brax could have climbed through the bedroom window to find Ricky and Denny sleeping together or gotten in bed with Denny when Ricky was going to the toilet one night haha So really he found out about them in the kindest sort of way lol

Expand  

Now you're having me wish I had done it like that! That would have been great!  Well maybe I'll do a rewrite in the future and I'll have that scene in it. 

Thanks guys, I'll update soon. 

 

[pembie]

  On 16/09/2018 at 11:04, D.B said:

 

Now you're having me wish I had done it like that! That would have been great!  Well maybe I'll do a rewrite in the future and I'll have that scene in it. 

Thanks guys, I'll update soon. 

 

Expand  

Depends on whether you want the comedy version of this story haha I think you are aiming for a serious vibe though lol 

[pembie]

Will you be finishing this story DB?