Maybe Too Close? (by D.B) - comments

[D.B]

  On 18/05/2018 at 16:36, pembie said:

Do you plan to bring Brax back serves him right to return to find his old girlfriend is now a lesbian haha He really was a twit lol

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Do it in true soap form and have Brax return to find Denny and Ricky going at it like rabbits at Tamara and Kyle's wedding haha

 

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Oh my god, Pembie, you never fail to make me laugh!  

I'm not actually sure about bringing Brax back in this fanfiction, I have never really thought about it, but it would make for extra drama, especially in the way you describe it! I will think about it. Thanks for commenting.

Edited May 18, 2018 by D.B

[Helena]

I would love to see brax in this story

[pembie]

  On 18/05/2018 at 22:16, D.B said:

Oh my god, Pembie, you never fail to make me laugh!  

 

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Really that's remarkable I have only left you two comments so far haha

[D.B]

  On 19/05/2018 at 14:40, pembie said:

Really that's remarkable I have only left you two comments so far haha

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I was also referring to your own fanfictions, I've read a lot of them and they're just amazing and hilarious.

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Aww loved the moment between Denny and Ricky

Glad they are together now

Update soon please xx

[Red Ranger 1]

Good chapter. Liked all the couples coming together and an important step forward for Ricky and Denny. So...will it be plain sailing now? I suspect not...

[Helena]

Yay Ricky and Denny are now together imagine if brax turned up and Kyle and Tamara are married I have just realised that from the beginning of this story I thought it was Kyle and phoebe I guess I must have been really tired

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Aww finally Denny and Ricky are together 

Update again soon

 

[D.B]

  On 24/05/2018 at 21:49, Red Ranger 1 said:

Good chapter. Liked all the couples coming together and an important step forward for Ricky and Denny. So...will it be plain sailing now? I suspect not...

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Yeah, the two of them still have a lot of things to deal with. Like Kyle, I mean how would he react if (and when) he finds out that his brothers' exes are for each other? Not well, I think. I'm glad that you enjoyed this. Also glad you liked all the couples as well, I felt like adding all these characters in this, even if it is in a small way. 

Edited May 26, 2018 by D.B

[pembie]

Well its not quite perfect Denny might feel different when she's hungover Sorry to burst the bubble haha

Oh and Brody and Josh in a short space of a chapter I felt more chemistry there than I have ever about Brody and Ziggy haha