Maybe Too Close? (by D.B) - comments

[Helena]

I had really hoped that it was going to be brax who say them together I'm disappointed that it was Kyle instead I agree with Kyle and when brax finally comes back and finds out brax will be super furious

[Guest]

Great chapter

Surprised it was Kyle that found out  about Denny and Ricky

Update again soon 

[Red Ranger 1]

I don't think there was anything wrong with Kyle's portrayal here. He's loyal to Brax but not so completely blind that he doesn't see why Ricky would need to move on at some point. Looking forward to more!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

So it was Kyle who found out about Denny and Ricky. What a surprise

Update soon please xx

 

[pembie]

Sorry I seem to have fell behind with everything H&A latety

But anywho I never thought that that it would be quite a odd thing to see two of your brothers exes snogging..

You never know Kyle could end up kidnapping Denny and drag her out into the desert haha

[Red Ranger 1]

Nice that Kyle knows deep down that he can't blame Ricky, and in fact can't bring himself to do so with Tamara.And good that Ricky and Denny have got through this.

[Helena]

It's good that you're planning on bringing brax into this story I feel sorry for Kyle keep updating

[Guest]

Great chapter

It's good Kyle can't really be mad at Ricky or blame her

Update again soon 

[Inactive User]

Great chapter 

Liked the chat between Kyle and Tamara

Update soon please xx

[pembie]

Tamara's advice to Kyle to remember Brax as he was I had to laugh because I rememeber Brax as a class A twat haha But I liked all the drama he brought he was still a twit though