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While it's nice Dylan gets to see his Dad and Aunt, I'd keep my head on a swivel if I was Shane. 

I've visualized this and Ramsay and Lenka would have knocked this out this out of the park as would Dieter and Isla.

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On ‎17‎/‎08‎/‎2020 at 03:56, Kristen said:

glad Shannon and Shane agreed to Paul seeing Dylan and Frankie seeing baby Angel.

Interesting backstories 

 

On ‎17‎/‎08‎/‎2020 at 12:21, Chair said:

I'm glad they were able to talk things through.  I hope Paul and Frankie aren't going to try anything underhand.

 

10 hours ago, CaptainHulk said:

While it's nice Dylan gets to see his Dad and Aunt, I'd keep my head on a swivel if I was Shane. 

I've visualized this and Ramsay and Lenka would have knocked this out this out of the park as would Dieter and Isla.

Thanks, all of you. I kind of thought about how they were both left and it did seem like Paul and Frankie would gravitate towards each other and feel a certain about of resentment towards Shane. And that Shannon might be able to convince Shane to give them the benefit of the doubt in the situation. I kind of enjoyed bringing them all together like that and letting them thrash it out because there's an awful lot of buried feelings there!

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Great chapter 

Shane and Shannon becoming happy parents to baby Katie

Selina observing Shannon giving birth

Don thinking Katie should be Katherine/Kathleen  :lol: 
Update again soon  :)

 

 

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Donald looked a bit puzzled.“Shouldn’t that be Katherine or Kathleen or something?”

  “Nope, just Katie.”

  Donald mulled it over.“Well, yes, I think it quite suits her.If you’re both happy with it?”

 

That sounds just like something Donald would say ?

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I can just see Tempany/Selina getting all clucky while Isla/Shannon shoots her evils while wincing in agony as the baby comes!  Katrina/Kelly would be on point too.

Funny Don would suggest Katherine given his previous connection to another Katherine at the time...

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On ‎23‎/‎08‎/‎2020 at 22:56, Kristen said:

Selina observing Shannon giving birth

 

On ‎24‎/‎08‎/‎2020 at 13:23, Chair said:

It's good to see Selina still training as a nurse.

 

9 hours ago, CaptainHulk said:

I can just see Tempany/Selina getting all clucky while Isla/Shannon shoots her evils while wincing in agony as the baby comes! 

Thanks, everyone, glad you liked that! I thought it would add a bit of humour to the scene to have Selina in there with them.

 

20 hours ago, Summer's Bay said:

That sounds just like something Donald would say ?

Thanks! There are some characters whose speech patterns you have to pay special attention to so I hope I've got Don right.

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Great chapter 

Shannon and Shane got engaged quickly 

glad everyone is on board 

Update again soon :)

 

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