Chair Posted May 18, 2020 Report Posted May 18, 2020 Thanks @Red Ranger 1. You've captured the characters perfectly here. I look forward to finding out what happens next. Quote
Sunny Girl Posted May 20, 2020 Report Posted May 20, 2020 I am really enjoying this story, @redranger. As always, you capture the essence of the characters really well and it makes such a difference to the flow and the quality of the story. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 22, 2020 Report Posted May 22, 2020 On 18/05/2020 at 12:30, Kristen said: Sally and Shannon so cute Shane and Shannon oh and Shannon staying the night. Glad you liked it. On 18/05/2020 at 19:28, chair said: You've captured the characters perfectly here. On 20/05/2020 at 05:41, Sunny Girl said: As always, you capture the essence of the characters really well and it makes such a difference to the flow and the quality of the story. Thanks, both of you! I do always try, especially when writing something people are going to read like this, to make the sure the characters' voices sound right. 1 Quote
CaptainHulk Posted May 22, 2020 Report Posted May 22, 2020 Good stuff, Red. This alternate 1996verse is a joy to read. Sal and Curtis do make a good couple, I imagine he would be super-caring towards her and she'd definitely be a rock when he has deal with his diabetic stuff. Well, no man among us could blame Shane. Shannon was one best looking girls at the time. It's not too far of what could have gone down on screen. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 24, 2020 Report Posted May 24, 2020 On 22/05/2020 at 18:32, CaptainHulk said: This alternate 1996verse is a joy to read. Sal and Curtis do make a good couple, I imagine he would be super-caring towards her and she'd definitely be a rock when he has deal with his diabetic stuff. Well, no man among us could blame Shane. Shannon was one best looking girls at the time. Thanks, CaptainHulk! The whole thing started from that point of "What if Angel had died instead and something had happened between Shane and Shannon?", and I decided to throw Sally/Curtis into the mix as well to differentiate it further from what happened on screen. Quote
CaptainHulk Posted May 25, 2020 Report Posted May 25, 2020 (edited) We want more! We want more! We want more! *beats a drum, blows kazoo* Edited May 25, 2020 by CaptainHulk Quote
CaptainHulk Posted May 25, 2020 Report Posted May 25, 2020 Holy s***, I can't believe that worked so fast! Either way, cheers. Sal would naturally detect Shannon not being home on account of sharing a room. The Angel thing seems cold-hearted but most likely what Shannon would be saying. The Michael/Shane dialogue is believable. Quote
Chair Posted May 25, 2020 Report Posted May 25, 2020 Thanks for the update @Red Ranger 1 You've captured the characters perfectly. I look forward to reading more. Quote
Guest Posted May 25, 2020 Report Posted May 25, 2020 Great chapter Pippa having a chat with Shannon Sally offering to talk with Shannon Michael chatting to Shane I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 28, 2020 Report Posted May 28, 2020 On 25/05/2020 at 17:39, CaptainHulk said: The Angel thing seems cold-hearted but most likely what Shannon would be saying. I guess it could be seen that way but Shannon was feeling a bit fed up at being judged. On 25/05/2020 at 20:00, chair said: You've captured the characters perfectly. I look forward to reading more. Thank you, I try! On 26/05/2020 at 00:21, Kristen said: Pippa having a chat with Shannon Sally offering to talk with Shannon Michael chatting to Shane Yep, that happened. Quote
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