Summer's Bay Posted June 25, 2020 Report Posted June 25, 2020 Good stuff I like softer understanding Donald. Reading this reminds me that he really did go through a lot of heartache. Quote
Guest Posted June 26, 2020 Report Posted June 26, 2020 Great Chapter Liked the exchange between Don and Alf. Lol at Marilyn once losing a kid. Sounds like Don’s evening with Shannon and Shane went well Update again soon Quote
Chair Posted June 26, 2020 Report Posted June 26, 2020 Thanks for the update @Red Ranger 1 I'm glad the dinner went well. Quote
CaptainHulk Posted June 27, 2020 Report Posted June 27, 2020 A 180 in what was expected. I thought Shane or Shannon would have felt like Don was having a go/dig/crack and would have spent the meal on Defence. Alf was definitely in character. The Roo mention would have called for an ad break before resuming. Nice use of references to 1988 and 1991. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 29, 2020 Report Posted June 29, 2020 On 26/06/2020 at 05:28, Kristen said: Lol at Marilyn once losing a kid. On 27/06/2020 at 17:14, CaptainHulk said: Nice use of references to 1988 and 1991. Glad you liked it.It seemed an ideal opportunity to add a bit of colour to the scene. On 26/06/2020 at 05:28, Kristen said: Sounds like Don’s evening with Shannon and Shane went well On 26/06/2020 at 12:13, chair said: I'm glad the dinner went well. On 27/06/2020 at 17:14, CaptainHulk said: A 180 in what was expected. I thought Shane or Shannon would have felt like Don was having a go/dig/crack and would have spent the meal on Defence. I think they all want to get on rather than cause some sort of rift so they'd be trying their best. On 26/06/2020 at 05:28, Kristen said: Liked the exchange between Don and Alf. On 27/06/2020 at 17:14, CaptainHulk said: Alf was definitely in character. The Roo mention would have called for an ad break before resuming. Thanks.I wanted to show Alf's perspective but I was a bit worried that the scene didn't really flow naturally.I ended up rewriting it a bit because Alf's reaction didn't feel entirely in character on first go so glad you think I got it right! Quote
Chair Posted July 2, 2020 Report Posted July 2, 2020 Thanks for the update @Red Ranger 1 I'm glad they managed to talk things through and are together now. Quote
Guest Posted July 3, 2020 Report Posted July 3, 2020 (edited) Great chapter glad Shane and Shannon talked things out and agreed to be together now. liked Shane telling Shannon she would be a great mother Update again soon Edited July 3, 2020 by Kristen Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 5, 2020 Report Posted July 5, 2020 On 02/07/2020 at 13:39, Chair said: I'm glad they managed to talk things through and are together now. On 03/07/2020 at 12:12, Kristen said: glad Shane and Shannon talked things out and agreed to be together now. liked Shane telling Shannon she would be a great mother Thanks, both of you. I guess things were heading that way for a while even if they both had a hard time admitting it! Quote
Chair Posted July 9, 2020 Report Posted July 9, 2020 Thanks for the update @Red Ranger 1 I'm glad they were honest about their feelings. Dylan took the news in a very cute way. Quote
CaptainHulk Posted July 10, 2020 Report Posted July 10, 2020 Good stuff. Shane's concerns are legit, I like this community feel. Good talk with Travis similar to the one with Curtis the previous year. I get a feeling this may be concerning Michael more than he's letting on. Dylan took it like he would on screen. He was always fond of Shannon. Lay on, Macduff! Quote
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