Homecoming Part 4 (by Summer's Bay) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Alf might be being a bit optimistic...

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Alf might be a bit Optimistic trying to get Ailsa back so soon.

Haydn telling his mate that he heard Celia talking on the phone about Alf and Ailsa the twins being his children.

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Edited September 6, 2020 by Kristen

[CaptainHulk]

Wow, Debs copped a serve.

Grant, Celia, Bobby and Colleen were written realistically.

Ben really is pathetic, yes a teething baby is no picnic but he needs to get over himself.

Betty would be listening and that little stirrer Haydn.

Keep on!

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Poor Julie

Ben is  a creepy A-hole

Uh-oh was Haydn the one who told the whole town about Alf and Ailsa?
Pippa leaving New York

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[Guest]

Great chapter 

Whoa lots going on there.

Carly bad idea marrying Ben uh-oh.

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[Guest]

Great chapter 

Poor Ailsa

so much going on at the Fletcher house.
Oh dear at the ending 

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[Guest]

Great chapter 

Poor Frank.

Alan telling Julie what he saw bad idea.

Don helping Alf out after he was in a dark place drunk.

Poor Carly.

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[Red Ranger 1]

Carly may have read Ben wrong again, living there rent free seems like it would suit him fine. Ooh, Bobby's going to do something stupid, isn't she..?

[Red Ranger 1]

Huh.Carly getting it from all angles now. Can Nick actually manage a date with Julie this time?

[Guest]

Great chapters

whoa at the endings.

what has Carly got in to with Ben being miss snotty?

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Edited September 18, 2020 by Kristen