Homecoming Part 4 (by Summer's Bay) - comments

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Nasty Ben.

oh Adam wants to get Marilyn back hopefully she won’t freak out again 

Update again soon  

 

Edited March 9, 2020 by Kristen

[Red Ranger 1]

I think Grant's being a bit generous towards Adam, even though his intentions are mostly good.

[CaptainHulk]

13 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

I think Grant's being a bit generous towards Adam, even though his intentions are mostly good.

Grant was always willing to give people the BOTD.

[Summer's Bay]

Thanks for reading. Sorry for the delay in updating.

I hope to have a chapter up by the weekend

[Guest]

Great Chapter 

oh no Marilyn opened the door to Ben

Carly blaming Grant for ruining her relationship with Ben.

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Edited March 23, 2020 by Kristen

[Red Ranger 1]

Ben is seriously delusional. Bobby getting jealous is a bit strange.

[CaptainHulk]

Soldier Boy's gone over the line.

 

[Summer's Bay]

On 23/03/2020 at 05:17, Red Ranger 1 said:

Ben is seriously delusional. Bobby getting jealous is a bit strange.

I wouldn't say jealous...just very lonely, and wishing she had someone....anyone..

 

Thanks for reading. Sorry for the delay in updating.

I hope to have a chapter up by the weekend 

Edited April 2, 2020 by Summer's Bay

[Guest]

Great Chapter 

Nice that Frank was able to get some air.

Oh Carly being a brat to Bobby

Narelle could be in a world of trouble 

Update again soon  

 

[Red Ranger 1]

Frank and Roo continue to drift apart...Why has Carly fired Grant, did Ben tell her to? I guess it's good that Marilyn's giving Adam another chance...