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Great start RR1

oh Coco got pregnant interesting.

Ziggy being worried about that.

Update again soon :)

 

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I really enjoyed this chapter of the story.  Ziggy seemed to take the news of Coco being pregnant well and agreed to keep it from their parents.  I also enjoyed the interactions with Irene and Marilyn and Ryder and Bella in the diner.  Looking forward to reading more.

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Great chapter 

Ziggy seemed to take the news well.

I liked the mention of Irene and Marilyn.

Bella and Ryder dating interesting twist 

Update again soon :)

 

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Loved this chapter

I loved Ziggy supporting her sister

Loved Coco reunion with Bella and Ryder

The fact Bella and Ryder is a couple makes me so happy. I always wanted these two to get together.

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17 hours ago, Helena said:

Ziggy seemed to take the news of Coco being pregnant well and agreed to keep it from their parents.  I also enjoyed the interactions with Irene and Marilyn and Ryder and Bella in the diner. 

 

11 hours ago, Kristen said:

Ziggy seemed to take the news well.

I liked the mention of Irene and Marilyn.

 

7 hours ago, Zig said:

I loved Ziggy supporting her sister

Loved Coco reunion with Bella and Ryder

 

6 hours ago, beachside said:

Glad Ziggy is supporting her sister.

Loved seeing Coco reunite with Bella and Ryder.

Glad you all liked that interaction. I think Ziggy and Coco did develop a close sisterly bond during the whole cancer storyline, and they've probably both grown up since their early days, so it was nice to write that new dynamic.We didn't get to see Coco and Bella for long, but it felt like they could have had a good friendship.

11 hours ago, Kristen said:

Bella and Ryder dating interesting twist 

 

7 hours ago, Zig said:

The fact Bella and Ryder is a couple makes me so happy. I always wanted these two to get together.

Yes, I wanted them together too. Benefits of getting to write your own version!

6 hours ago, beachside said:

I feel like Ben and Maggie should know sooner than later. 

Ben and Maggie should probably be told, but Coco's not ready to deal with that at the moment, so everyone's respecting her wishes.

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