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Great chapter 

Justin and VJ seemed a bit icy.

Coco and VJ are official now.

oh dear Mick is coming back not going to end well.

Update again soon :)

 

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Oh dear it was awkward with vj and Justin coco and vj are now dating oh no Mick is on his way I enjoyed all the interactions in this chapter of the story looking forward to reading more.

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On 11/11/2021 at 07:02, Kristen said:

Justin and VJ seemed a bit icy.

 

1 hour ago, Helena said:

Oh dear it was awkward with vj and Justin

Yep, not the easiest of situations for either of them!

 

On 11/11/2021 at 07:02, Kristen said:

oh dear Mick is coming back not going to end well.

 

2 hours ago, Helena said:

oh no Mick is on his way

Well, it was kind of inevitable once VJ brought Luc back to the Bay...

Glad you're both enjoying it!

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Great chapter 

Coco and Bella having a girls chat 

Oh someone murdered Mick and VJ is a suspect.

This can’t end well 

Update again soon :)

 

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I really enjoyed this chapter of the story.  I loved the chat between Bella and Coco and it seems that Mick was murdered and VJ is a suspect.  Looking forward to reading more.

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SPAG and capital letters for people's names!
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On 14/11/2021 at 00:00, Kristen said:

Coco and Bella having a girls chat 

 

On 14/11/2021 at 03:32, Helena said:

I loved the chat between Bella and Coco

Glad you liked that: I figured that I hadn't done much with Bella and Ryder so I thought I'd give them that moment!

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I really enjoyed this chapter of the story.  Oh no the police seems to think that VJ killed Mick and he could be charged with murder.  I really enjoyed the interactions between Coco and Luc and Leah.  Looking forward to reading more.

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Please use correct SPAG and Capital Letters for names.
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Great chapter

The police thinking VJ killed Mick.

I loved the interaction with Coco and Luc and Leah

Update again soon :)

 

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