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On 16/11/2021 at 23:13, Helena said:

I really enjoyed the interactions between Coco and Luc and Leah. 

 

On 16/11/2021 at 23:44, Kristen said:

I loved the interaction with Coco and Luc and Leah

Thanks, I felt I needed to show them coping together with VJ busy elsewhere.

14 hours ago, Zig said:

Finally caught up on this story. I love it.

 

13 hours ago, beachside said:

Oh god what a few chapters

Glad you both caught up!

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So someone named Warren killed Mick, at least he is free now.  I am glad that Leah and Coco visited him.  I enjoyed the chat between VJ and Coco at the end.  Looking forward to reading more .

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Great chapter 

so this Warren guy killed Mick

I’m glad VJ is free.

I enjoyed the VJ and Coco moment at the end.

Update again soon :)

 

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On 20/11/2021 at 17:58, Helena said:

So someone named Warren killed Mick, at least he is free now. 

 

On 20/11/2021 at 23:31, Kristen said:

so this Warren guy killed Mick

Yeah, I kind of liked the idea of it being someone we didn't know, given that the police already wanted him when we first met him so he must have teed off a lot of people in the past.

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I really enjoyed this chapter of the story, I loved the chat between Coco and Ziggy. I also enjoyed the chat between VJ and Justin and Leah and all the interactions between the rest of Summer Bay as Coco and VJ and Luc left.  Looking forward to reading more.

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Great chapter 

I enjoyed the chat between Coco and Ziggy.

Everyone farewelling VJ,Coco and Luc was a nice touch.

Update again soon :)

 

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On 27/11/2021 at 21:08, Helena said:

I also enjoyed the chat between VJ and Justin and Leah

I kind of like the idea of Justin being a very awkward step-parent to VJ down to not really knowing him.

 

On 27/11/2021 at 21:08, Helena said:

all the interactions between the rest of Summer Bay as Coco and VJ and Luc left.

 

On 28/11/2021 at 05:49, Kristen said:

Everyone farewelling VJ,Coco and Luc was a nice touch.

Yes, I had to give them that moment!

 

On 28/11/2021 at 07:21, Zig said:

Great Chapters

Loving this story

Thank you, glad you're enjoying!

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I really enjoyed this chapter of the story I loved the interactions between vj and coco and luc and Leah and Ben and Maggie I can't believe that it's finished I really enjoyed this story looking forward to seeing what else you write if you decide to.

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Great chapter 

loved the interaction between everyone Maggie,Ben,Leah,Justin,Luc,VJ and Coco

I can’t believe this is over

 

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