Past, Present and Future (by Zig) - comments

[beachside]

Nathan better not get to her

Lesson to be learnt expect the least expected 

[christine king]

Great to see Martha reunited with Sally and Flynn. I hope she is safe in the bay.

Aww Martha meets Tony and Jack.

Aww Jack and Martha going for a swim fully clothed lol.

Oh Nathan isn’t giving up and Martha knows Jack is a cop.

 

Edited March 23, 2022 by christine king

[Zig]

57 minutes ago, christine king said:

Great to see Martha reunited with Sally and Flynn. I hope she is safe in the bay.

Aww Martha meets Tony and Jack.

Aww Jack and Martha going for a swim fully clothed lol.

Oh Nathan isn’t giving up and Martha knows Jack is a cop.

 

Glad you have enjoyed this story so far. Thanks for feedback and I hope you will read more.

[beachside]

Great chapter

Glad Martha let Jack see her

[christine king]

Jack like no one locks doors in this town this is so suss what is Martha hiding 

[Zig]

10 minutes ago, beachside said:

Great chapter

Glad Martha let Jack see her

Glad you liked the chapter.

[RebeccaR]

Really enjoying this story. Can't wait to see how this story goes. 

[Zig]

4 hours ago, RebeccaR said:

Really enjoying this story. Can't wait to see how this story goes. 

Glad you are enjoying this. Thanks for reading.

[RebeccaR]

Awww jack being there for Martha.

Can't wait to see their relationship develop.

Looking forward to reading more.

[beachside]

The relationship is definitely developing

Jack trusts Martha