pembie Posted July 15 Author Report Posted July 15 On 13/07/2024 at 11:12, Zig said: Caught up on the last two chapters, loving this and that Emmett was included, him and Bella were friendship goals to me. Both Ryder and Emmett would also be better ships for Bella them Nikau. Ryder was the type of guy who would be. friend zoned Quote
pembie Posted July 22 Author Report Posted July 22 So Archibald was having building work done could he afford to pay the money? Wendy got sacked for stealing she’s bit obvious though Quote
Zig Posted July 24 Report Posted July 24 Love all the twists and turns that this chapter had. Can't wait for more Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 24 Report Posted July 24 On 22/07/2024 at 03:14, pembie said: So Archibald was having building work done could he afford to pay the money? Wendy got sacked for stealing she’s bit obvious though 6 hours ago, Zig said: Love all the twists and turns that this chapter had. Can't wait for more Thanks, both of you! I needed to build up some suspects! Quote
pembie Posted July 26 Author Report Posted July 26 On 24/07/2024 at 19:01, Red Ranger 1 said: Thanks, both of you! I needed to build up some suspects! I’m waiting for Bella to take a picture of something she’s not meant too Quote
Zig Posted July 27 Report Posted July 27 Such a good chapter, I wonder who got the money, can't wait for more. Ps thanks for inspiring me to write my own fic Quote
pembie Posted July 28 Author Report Posted July 28 Archibald could have the money in his safe still Hmm but no I think it’s somebody else someone who we are yet to meet maybe I liked the whole having sex cover and the idea of them seeking out the best bed to do it and Ryder being put off be Bella’s teddy bears yeah creepy Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 28 Report Posted July 28 On 27/07/2024 at 05:14, Zig said: Such a good chapter, I wonder who got the money, can't wait for more. 11 hours ago, pembie said: Archibald could have the money in his safe still Hmm but no I think it’s somebody else someone who we are yet to meet maybe Thanks, I'm glad you're both still guessing! 11 hours ago, pembie said: I liked the whole having sex cover and the idea of them seeking out the best bed to do it and Ryder being put off be Bella’s teddy bears yeah creepy Yes, that seemed like the sort of thing Bella would come up with on the spot and Ryder would have to run with! Quote
Zig Posted July 30 Report Posted July 30 Loving this story so much, didn't expect it to be Chase, can't wait to see what happens next Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 3 Report Posted August 3 On 31/07/2024 at 00:24, Zig said: Loving this story so much, didn't expect it to be Chase, Glad you liked it, I was worried I'd gone too far in introducing him and then making people forget him! Quote
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