Stole

[Billy]

chapter 16:dangerous dani:

everyone was in mourning as people were walking in the church. sally carried the ashes with everyone else behind. the vicar went up and down his speech then martha walked and said no stop. she then gave a speech. jesse was my pride and joy he was my soulmate now his to the world up above. sally clapped and gave the ashes to martha. she then scarttered them along the gym and the bar and cried then sally was then thinking about what she saw when dani was there.

tasha is in a coma and the doctors do not no when she is going to wake up irene got on to the phone to ian and josie but nobody was answering because one is dead and one may be dead.

kirsty and kane are finding it tiring to look after the baby because it was so soon after kirstys operation and they just want a rest but the baby and kirsty has got more on her plate when she disscovers dani has been taking drugs.

dani got to the palace and she saw this man tying up hayley dani then got a frying pan and smacked the delivery man over the head she then hides the body where nobody would ever find it, in her boot of her car. hayley is shocked over danis rage and she dani decides to go and pick up the drugs and leave summer bay forever with the body.

at the gym sally is sitting there when someone comes in and attacks her and it is later evealed to be dalton.

NEXT TIME:DANI PREPARES TO GO ON THE RUN BUT IT IS A DEVESTATING SHOWDOWN BETWEEN HER AND KIRSTY BUT WILL SHE GET THE DRUGS IN TIME AND WILL HAYLEY TELL THE POLICE ABOUT THE MURDER PLUS DALTON PREPARES TO TELL SALLY ABOUT WHAT IS IN STORE FOR THE LITTLE TOWN...

[Jackieleanne]

Drama I love it.

[Billy]

chapter 17:explosive exit:

dani was driving along with a body in the boot she then thought about the drugs that she hid in kirsty and kanes caravan so she heads in that direction

kirsty was packing her stuff because they were moving somewhere else (not out of summer bay) she then found danis drugs and put them in her pocket then kirsty heard dani.

meanwhlie hayley was shaking as the phone was in her hand she thought should i dob on dani or should i thankyou her for saving me. she then dialed 999 then said hello i would like to report murder is a very shakey voice she said that dani is at the caravan park.

dani came into the caravan and shouted kirsty kane she then got all of her stuff then she found out the drugs were missing. kirsty then came out from the shower and said to dani looking for this dani was screaming as she remembers that what sarah said to her and scott on the night of that seige and then pretened she was standing up to sarah and whacked kirsty so kirsty thought back and jumped on her back and started to rip danis hair out.

the police got hayley and they were racing to get to the caravan park whlie kirsty and dani were having sister fights.

dani got kirsty on the floor and went threw her pockets she found the drugs she went to go outside the the police arrived she had to run but they finally cuaght her in the end and she was arrested kirsty and hayley were glad.

meanwhlie somewhere in summer bay sally was screaming dalton what are you doing then dalton replied im going to tell you how im going to destroy summer bay sally was shocked...

NEXT TIME:IS IT ALL OVER FOR SALLY WHEN DALTON REALEASES HIS TRUE COLOURS WHEN SALLY ATTACKS HIM, KIRSTY IS SHOCKED ABOUT HER SISTERS SENTENCE AND THE SEARCH FOR SALLY BEGINS BUT THERE ARE SHOCKS ON THE WAY AND JADE RETURNS TO SUMMER BAY AND IS KANE ABOUT TO GET KIDDNAPPED BY MARGERET AND KIM...

[qutee_001]

You sent me a private message and i did reply to that. Read it and you'll know how i feel about your fanfics. Its nothing against you...

[Billy]

chapter 18:scandelous:

sally then said why do you want to destroy summer bay for to dalton. dalton then said summer bay will pay for the misfourntrues. sally was trying to un do her ropes.

kirsty heard on the phone that dani has got life in prison for murder and drugs kirsty is sharttered then jade walked in the door and said kirsty. kirsty was just shocked.

kane was walking when someone behind him got hold of him he was shouting for help then the person put the bag over the head but kane kicked the person and ran.

flynn and dan are looking for sally really despretly. they dicide to do a tv appeal if they cant find her.

alf spots morag with kim and margeret what is she about to do. and alf then hears there is going to be a herrific storm.

sally untied herself and unleashed at dalton but then dalton got hold of her throat and started srangling her sally then kicked him and ran out of where she was being taken hostage.

NEXT TIME IN A SPECIAL CHAPTER CALLED LEAP OF FAITH:SALLY BATTLES FOR HER LIFE THEN DALTON AND SALLY HAVE A SHOWDOWN ON A CLIFF BUT WHO WILL WIN PLUS CAN FLYNN FIND SALLY IN TIME...

[starlet_girl]

You sent me a private message and i did reply to that. Read it and you'll know how i feel about your fanfics. Its nothing against you... 

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I got one too...so here I am, replying

[Billy]

special chapter:leap of faith:

sally was running and running away from dalton but dalton was just staying in his base but why.

flynn was at the police station waiting for news on sally he heard the clock and he was saying tick tock tick tock in a really quiet voice.

sally went to abbondened factory near the cliff she was hiding then daltons car arrived outside. dalton then made his way into the factory he then shouted sally if you do not come out now you will not live the night. sally then crept across the floor and saw daltons feet. sally then shullfeled and dalton said sally i no you are in here. sally then ran across to a big machine dalton saw her and started chasing her round the factory. sally then went out to the fire exit and there was two cliffs with a gap sally then run back and then jumped in mid air. she nearly misses the cliff and is hanging on with her fingers she finally pulled herself up but then dalton was on the otherside. dalton then jumped over the cliff susessfully and was blocking ways for sally to get of the cliff. dalton started to go towaards sally sally kept on going back. dalton then kept on going foward then sally pushed dalton off the cliff. sally was then sitting on the cliff and said i commited murder.

NEXT TIME:KIRSTY AND KANES BABY IS IN PERIL AS HE GETS KIDDNAPPED BY A PERSON, WHAT IS MORAG PLANNING FOR SUMMER BAY WILL SALLY TELL THE POLICE SHE COMMITED MURDER AND A STORM HEADS FOR SUMMER BAY...

[Jackieleanne]

Lots of drama yet again

[Billy]

chapter 19:hold:

sally was walking and walking and thinking about what she had done to dalton and said im going to give myself in im not allowed to commit murder. sally walked to the police station where flynn was and he said sally where were you sally just pushed him out the way and said to new police dectective maxwell that she commited murder. maxwell then arrested sally and she was taken away in a police car flynn just cleary shocked.

alf then sees morag talking to maargeret and kim but what is she planning. when morag went out alf searched threw her handbag and found some tabblets. alf then took the tabblets out of her bag. later morag came home and was going frantic about something but what. then her mobile ran and she said tomorrow 4pm on the beach. leah heard this conversation.

things started to get preety windy in summer bay today as a storm was brewing. alf said it is going to get worst on monday.

kirsty and jade were talking about there lives in summer bay and about baby k.j. kirsty had to go to the toliet so they left jade and k.j on the beach together jade then got up a hill and ran away with baby k.j. when kirsty got outside she found out that jade and her baby were gone together but where. kirsty told kane and kane was frantic and said jade snatched him kirsty said you do not no that kane then replied well what are the other possibilitys kirsty said to kane they could have not got that far.

the search party begins. irene and kirsty were waiting by the phone anxiously for them to find jade and k.j then the phone ran. irene answered it and said hello jade then said put it on to kirsty. kirsty then said hello jade then replied the old factory be there or else the phone then went dead and kirsty was sobbing her heart out to irene. kirsty then got in the car and went to the old factory...

NEXT TIME:SALLYS IN PRISON WILL FLYNN SAVE HER, KIRSTY IS ON A MISSION TO RESCUE HER BAY BUT THERE IS A SHOCK REVELATION MADE BY JADE, MORAG AND MARGERET GO ON THE MISSION TO KILL SUMMER BAY AND THE STORM GETS A WHLOE LOT WORST...

[Claire]

Just got the PM myself... like the drama and everything, but I think you need to brush up on SPAG to make it more easy to read - particularly by using capital letters where appropriate...