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Detective Peter Baker Is Back!


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Back at Irene’s house Kim’s just getting out of the shower. A hand comes from behind the door. Kim hears the door open but just thinks it’s the wind. It’s all so quiet!!! You can hear nothing but the creaks and squeaks in the house. Suddenly the water stops running so he gets out of the shower, walks over to the mirror to check his hair out. He drops his towel on the floor so picks it up, looks in the mirror again. To his horror he runs out of the door leaving his towel behind but it’s too late. An arm comes from behind him and he’s out for the count!

Minutes later…….

From Kim’s now blurred vision all we can see is a strange figure walking out the back door leaving something behind.

Peter is now outside the hospital frantically trying to get in contact with everyone he can. He tried phoning everyone most important to him but no one is picking up. He just remembers that he forgot about phoning Kim. The phones ringing but yet again no one is picking up. Kim is trying to get up but there’s no feeling in him anywhere.

Back inside the hospital Peter tells the nurse to inform him on any news on Clare’s condition as he’s got to go out. Everywhere needs to be investigated so he makes a call at Irene’s house to make sure everything’s alright.

The back door swings open. He knocks but there’s no answer. He’s just about to walk off then hears someone shouting ‘HELP’ from inside the house. He finds Kim lying at the bottom of the stairs but the state that he’s in is too shocking Peter has to cover his mouth. Above him on the window there’s a note saying….’You fed up yet pretty-boy, the game’s only just begun’.

Peter phones for the Ambulance to collect Kim then makes a stop at ‘Mangrove River’. The place is deserted no one is there but he just thinks that they must’ve got everyone out to help with the search.

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Peter gets a phone call from the hospital saying some one has been tampering with claire's wires. Pete rushes over the hospital and looks round claires room to find anouther note saying

' THE DAY WILL COME DETECTIVE BAKER

DON'T FORGET I KNOW YOU SAVED HER ONCE

BUT WILL YOU SAVE HER AGAIN?????'

Peter rushes over to sally house to find no one at the house, except another note saying

' why the **** do people think your smart'

Pete mobile phone rings, its the hospital saying that kim has'nt made it through.

Jack holden is forced to work with Pete because people think that Pete is loosing it.

Jack thinks off a place where leah could be, they rush down to the old derilick buildings. Jack forces his way in and finds a frezzing cold and uncousious leah.

Pete picks Leah up and takes her to the hospital.

When they arrive Pete gets a text message saying 'it took you too long boy'

The doctors tell Peter and jack that Leah has lost the baby. Peter starts to get tears in his eyes because he knows how much leah will be hurting when she finds out and its al peter faulty that he did'nt find the looney before he got leah.

Jack tells Pete that they still have got to find sally, Pete goes to get in his car when someone drives straight at him but he moves out of the way, jack did'nt manage to step out in time and he was hit by the car......

some one throws a piece a paper out of the car saying

'poor police man

your next'

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Pete rushes over to Jacks body trying to wake him up. Alf and Robbie run over towards Jack. Alf gives Jack mouth to mouth Pete drags Alf away saying let me do it. Pete finally manages to get Jack breathing again and Jack wakes up. Pete walks off in shock of the note. Jaclk wakes up asking for Pete but Pete is standing s in the corner punching the wall and kicking it. Tony runs over to try and stop Pete as he stops Pete from hurting his self any more, Pete turns round and breaks down in tony's arms. Jack is taken to hospital. Pete goes back to his car and finds another note saying '1:54mins tick tok!!! pete replies to the note by putting on it '1 hr turners lane' Pete decides to go early. Just as he is about to get to the end of turners lsne he hears a noise in the back of his car. Its Eve holding a gun to him. Pete goes to stop the car but she shoots him in the arm. Pete tries to rush out the car but Eve stops him. She drags Pete to the grass verge and holds him down. Eve bends over near his face and kisses him on the cheek saying 'You will allways be my number 1' 'thats why i had to kill Claire. She then injects Pete with something whilst Pete tries to get away Eve hold him down kissing him more. Pete decides to kiss her back so then he can escape. Eve finishes injecting him with something then Pete drops his head to the ground and closes his eyes. Eve drags him to the car and drives back up Turners lane.

End of season 1

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Is Pete alive?

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